• Member Since 27th Mar, 2012
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ROTHY


Coolest loser you've never met.

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Leon Blackell, magic user, lives in his own version of reality, living life without a care. With his bodyguard and his dog, he finds himself left to his own device in Equestria. Is this good? Is this bad? Who knows, he certainly doesn't care.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 6 )

meh. make it work, plz, and i won't unfave. you have 3 days for more content.

best comment and feedback ever amiright?
threatening and simple.

2795126
Working on chapter 2 as we speak.

This has potential, but it could probably do with another round or two of editing.

2809346
Well I am the only editor on this story, and I could use all the help I could get. If you know anyone who could help edit, that'd be great.

This is quite hard to read, I'm no expert but everytime a new character begins speaking aren't you supposed to make a new line?

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I think that depends on the writer. I could see about fixing it up. It's still a work in progress after all.

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