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Selbi


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The Pegasus that once lived inside me is dead. This book changed my life. Now I'm its slave to change the world.

...And I like it.


Inspired by the album ‘Agony’ from ‘Fleshgod Apocalypse’.


Huge thanks to:
- kcday for the cover art!
- Abcron for pre-reading and editing!

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 18 )

This was delicious. Make mooree..

SQUEEEEEE!2923135SQUEEEEEEEE!



SQUEEEEEEEE!

I thought it was the Death Note or something at first.

I cannot wait for more! Just refine you dialog a bit. It seems a bit scripted and cheesy.

2924476 Thor, for once I agree with you :rainbowdetermined2:

I hope no one misinterprets the blackness of that book as racist jokes

DAMNIT SELBI. NOW I CAN'T NOT THINK THAT

2947164
Blame Abcron. He saw them whenever I wrote the word "black", so I thought I should point that out in the A/N. :twilightsheepish:

Anyway, thanks for the watch!

It's awesome and can't wait to read the rest!!!

I'd read more of this. I'd also tell everyone to read it on pain of death. Good premise, and any time Twilight gets nearly murderized by a demonic book you know it's gonna be good.

3319114
I should really continue this, shouldn't I? Well, let's see if any inspiration and motivation hits me soon and hope for the best.

This is a good idea. This is a really good idea.

There's the usual smattering of grammatical errors here and there with a first chapter, but nothing that threw me off or pulled me away from the story itself. Please write another chapter. Please.

pls k

Stumbled upon this story, (well if that isn't ominous :rainbowderp:) and instantly got hooked into the chapter.
Can't wait for more!

I do not see a derpy pony
I see Derpy, a pony
One day I will figure out how to put a sig on Fimfiction.

When Rainbow first discovered that it was a book, I thought that it was the Necronomicon.
But this is just as good! :rainbowkiss:

Can you come back on it? It seems pretty good! :pinkiesmile:

5958509
It's as much of a cheesy first-timers story as one can imagine. Bringing it back is as hopeless as Dash's situation within the only chapter.

Thanks for the kind words anyway. :pinkiesmile:

5958571
Dude take a look at storm of steel, AKA my first story on my other account (the one who’s password I lost) and look at your story.… you’re going to see that you still have hope… seriously mine was just a crap ton of abandoned stories I jam packed into one story.

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