One day at school, the bullying from Diamond Tiara is just too much to handle, and Scootaloo has reached her limit.
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And so Scootaloo found her special talent at last, by pioneering the Harmony Punch.
2791673 Funny. You found and read this quick. Like, REALLY quick. It literally passed moderation less than five minutes ago. I know it's a short story, but man, that's fast.
2791682 Hay, yeah. I'm Rainbow frickin' Dash.
2792044 Nah, she realized how much of a bitch she was. She's not stupid. She's smart enough to know that if she does anymore, she'll probably get punched again. She's actually probably afraid of Scoots now.
Oh hell naw. D: Ass-beating commencing in three...two...
...one. XD Called it!
Scoots, this would be a REALLY good time to call off the hit-squad.
...All in all, a great, if short, read. XD
2791673 XD Now there needs to be a series of fics where Scoots fixes bad-attitude ponies with the Harmony Hoof. XD Played to eventual ludicrous levels.
2792245 Glad you enjoyed it. I actually wrote it about a year ago and...I'm not going to type this all out again. http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/180310/new-story So yeah, really glad to see all the positive feedback.
When diamond Tiara said that i cried Liquid Pride. the rest of the story, i was amazed that something else didn't happen. This could have some more to it, but nontheless, it was a great story of... i can't find the word.
2799322 It's supposed to be a short story.
Mmm mmm mmm... Like I always say; If violence ain't solving your problems, you ain't doing 'nuff of it.
*dealwithit*
2791673 Does that make her Captain Harmony?
2804212 well it could be longer, just saying.
2813796 Well it could, but does it need to be? Of course not.
2814093 but it could be, there is nothing wrong with just stating that. i'm not trying to hate on your story, it was a great story. i just thought that the story could have like a sequel or something.
something that's like RaptorCalloftheShadows said.
Sounds interesting, rated everybody, can't wait to read it!
~Scootaloo
Wow, I like this story! I wouldn't do that in real life, because I know Diamond Tiara wouldn't let me get away with that, but it seems like it would be fun! Thanks for the story!
~Scootaloo
2815242 Uh, ...no problem...
um, violence is magic? I'm sure this is your own headcanon and all but, what's the moral? sometimes violence is the answer?
2891592 Nah, there isn't really a moral here. When I came up with the very simple idea that is this story, I wasn't thinking of any sort of moral or lesson. It's about how much Scootaloo can take before she fucking loses her shit.
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Unfortunately sometimes it is the only way especially if the bully in question comes from a rich/influential family (like Diamond Tiara's) and everyone(pony) wants to stay on that family's good side and thus willing ignore whatever the bully is doing out of fear of retribution. Read the second installment of Moguera's Savage Skies series for an example of this.