"I don't know the key to success, but the key to failure is trying to please everybody" —Bill Cosby
I had an accident. With the help of a god, I got a second chance, but unfortunately, I was thrown into a colorful world of insanity.
Rated teen for minor cursing and what I might add later.
I tried a newer take on the HiE; there aren't humans for the majority of this story.
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O shnitzle this is really cool keep going
Is this a chess game of the gods story?
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I don't want to spoil anything
but yes, there are definitely going to be elements of that in this story
^
3098935 so. It is? Aoi?
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good one sir good one
3113249 Quite so
Umm...I'm gonna keep reading...
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Fantastic!
very good story so far.
i like it.
another very good chapter.
well..... wait... WHY DO I EWRY TIME START WITH THAT sorry its just i start with that on a comment allmost ewry time i hate it i came here to good chapter
i feel sick i thinck where rainbow kicked him oohhh wait she is pony and ponys have strong legs i thinck that shit that gotta hurt like hell
another very good chapter.
i can't wait to read the next chapter.
Awwwww yeah BRAWLIN'! I still think he's gonna turn into a wolf mid-fight, though. Eeyup.
I have no problems with this statement.
another very good chapter and can't wait to read the next chapter of this story.
I agree with the whole being sick stuck thing. Even wrouse when you've have it for 4 weeks. dam you swain flew
Anyway hope to see more
NEEDS...MORE...NOOOOOOW!!!!!!!
Reads first paragrah of the proluge... "Oooh, I like this... mmmhmmmm"
Hope Next one comes out soon but You know see ya in maybe an month? Or a Week Or even an year so Bye and
Great chapter
Oh shit, I laughed when I got the end procseesdddhsgfdb
Whats the "Writers Block"?
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Writers block is basically when you can't get a part of the story written like you want it to be. I had to rewrite that part several times before I was happy with it.
UHH... THE LAUGH LINK AND UHH!!!!........... THE OTHER LAUGH LINK!!!!! NOW GET ME MY COOKIE!!!
As soon as I looked at the picture of the story you put a link in, I knew it was about vampires.
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Nope. One was the second laugh link. The other is still out there.
3570335 Dangit.
Ahh, a lovely game of spot the references... I'm horrible at it.
I get to the end and think, "wait, there were references in there?"
Update?
another very good chapter, and I can't wait to read more of this story.
Eh, good enough.
Hows the next chapter coming
Hows the next chapter coming?
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Look, I'm sorry, but this is a hobby, not a job. I'm a full time engineering student, and that takes up most of my time. I also have a youtube channel I'm working on, and right now that takes up most of my spare time. The next chapter will come out when it's done and I'm satisfied with it. I haven't given up on this or anything, but I've got more important stuff going on in my life right now.
And I've got a good 2300 words in chapter 10 so far, to answer your question.
Okay thanks for the information
Now to a more pressing matter
*eep!* um if you want to give us more chapters that is
Lycans vampy Vamps and ponys can this get any better ''pulls out a box o popcorn''
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I guess that makes it three references. Oops.
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when will there be an update?
.....what
4878578 Applejack forgot about Twilight as she ran harder.
That's another way to look at it
another very good chapter I see, and I can't wait to read more of this fantastic story.
it's back! you get a internet cookie.
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Ahh, ok. That makes sense.
Rainbow should definitely give him another chance I mean he saved six fucking foals GODDAMMIT
My Thoughts:
This is really good in my opinion because:
it was decent speed,and it explains what is happening quite well.
besides from a couple grammar mistakes this story is really good
no commets? Hell yeah my time to shine... I LOVE APPLES AND CATS
I like this story because, despite some of the things that happened to him, the characters are not winners. If someone told me that a story about a human who got saved by a god and put into equestria who now has fire for hair and a red eye and a white eye, is also a werewolf, and the god stuck around to be the kid's caretaker AND ALSO is with RD is actually a pretty good story with interesting character development and beginnings to a very nice read, I would have looked at that guy funny. So, for making a farfetched story feel alive and real, kudos.