A series of strange disappearances scattered across Equestria have stumped all but the brightest minds. Now it's up to Twilight and a mismatched team consisting of and amnesiac hitmare with a past, and undercover officer with drinking issues, and a DJ with anger problems to find the connection between these occurrences and ultimately brings the culprit to justice.
A valiant first foray. I'm sure you can do if you continued. I gave a like because it shows good potential and promise for a first fic and an aspiring writer.