• Member Since 10th Jun, 2012
  • offline last seen Sep 25th, 2013

MahagonyCloud


I really only plan on 2 or 3 fanfics. But we shall see.

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I don't know why I'm here... But here I am... I have to start a new life... Turn a new leaf... I don't like to fight... But if it's what I have to do to save the people of the country that took me in, then so be it!

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I'm not sure if this abides by the rule of having to be relevant to the Friendship is Magic universe, but I'll give it my best shot.

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So Fluttershy is the Avatar? [Interesting I'll give it a read] :rainbowderp: [But are you gonna have that Chrom finds out Fluttershy isn;'t even human?

Ugh I just thought this, Fluttershy's son Morgan. :rainbowderp: That's gonna be weird.

Anyways, you've got my attention so far. Let's hope you're good at combat description cause this could go many ways from here. I would just like to suggest a little bit of exposition during the battle that isn't scripted as part of the game word for word per say. Like, Fluttershy's first battle could be a team up with Chrom and we get out of script a little bit. It's no fun to be able to guess every phrase that comes out of their mouths but I understand there are some things that are unavoidable to keep with the story.
That being said, I look forward to the next part. :pinkiehappy:

Fluttershy as a Tactician? This will be interesting...

Is this still going to update this is really good

2891563 It's a bit late, but since Fluttershy takes Robin's place, Morgan's bound to either inherit his mother's amazing singing voice, shyness, strong animal affinity, dracophobia or the Stare.

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A bit late? Just by 5 years :moustache:

Considering that's about how long the author has been offline I don't see this story being picked up. But for conversations sake, I'd think adopting the love for animals with an aversion to dragons could make an interesting dynamic among the army, directly considering Panne and Yarne vs Nowi, Tiki, and Nah. Might even give the young tactician a reason to carry a wyrmblade into battle, despite rarely running into wyvern riders until they get deeper into Valm. Maybe Cherche could get some spotlight as a bridge between her fears and a desire to trust and be trusted by her more dragon peers.

9216587 I can see Cherche helping Fluttershy with her dragon troubles and I can actually see Cynthia freaking out and fainting over Flutters' true form. On a side note, since Fluttershy's essentially Robin, everyone's gonna die from Morgan's cuteness. Everyone. Not even Gerome OR Lucina.

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