• Member Since 28th Apr, 2012
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Lance Skyes


Once a writer, but now gone. You might see him again one day, though...

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The evil barrels have kidnapped Stefano. (Again) However, when Pewdiepie tries to save Stefano, (again) he finds himself in the middle of an adventure bigger than the time he played Slender: The Arrival. (And could be more frustrating than the time he played Cat Mario.) Fortunately, by his side are Stefano, Twilight Sparkle, and Roger. (Which is his name for Fluttershy.) (Also, this story has EQG [Equestria Girls] continuity.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 34 )

I'm sorry to have to be the one to tell you, but you didn't write a story.

How is it possible to have such an epic downvote streak?

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butthurt bronies downvoting everything that is about pewdiepie, you can recognize them if they start trash talking shit about how much they hate pewds

Eugh no no no no no no no no no no no no no no no.

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There's also the fact that this is terrible.

First ten lines, stopped reading because my eyes and brain had begun to hurt from the idiotcy.

Good idea, put into practice really really badly.

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yeah, the lack of crativity helps a lot too...

I honestly think it could be good if you gave it a bit more work. for one, it doesn't make much sense that Twilight knows who Pewdiepie is because they don't have computers in Equestria (At least not in canon episodes ive seen) other than that, its okay. id like to see more of this. :pinkiehappy:

I don't get why this has so many dislikes already. I for one enjoyed this story so far.

If you can put more work in your writing, I'll read more of this. /)

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Pretty sure it has more to do with the fact that the story's bad and not because of Pewdiepie.

Then again, people who aren't 12 might be downvoting it based solely on awful e-"celebrity" in Equestria.

I'm not twelve, and yet I fucking loved this. It's actually pretty well written, I have not seen anything pewdiepie related before on here, and the author captured pewds oddness pretty well. Like and a fav from me.

A decent story, although it needs to slow down a little. You can't just throw in story elements all willy-nilly, you need to space it out. Develop the story a little then add in slendermane. You don't show all your cards at the beginning of a poker game so why should you get all of the surprises in the first chapter. You should take it down, work on it a while then re-post it. If it doesn't work out then, well, your story my friend.

yep.do more more more.its good,funny,and i want it so bad:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

"The evil barrels have kidnapped Stefano. "
"by his side are Stefano..."

Really?

im going to guess that people hate pewdiepie here and youtuber crossovers/

Okay, I'm just going to come out and say it, and this is the first time I've ever said this... there are too many comments here for me to reply to. :pinkiesick::applecry::fluttercry::raritycry:

For now, just... give me some time to write chapter two, okay?

WHY DOES EVERYONE HATE THIS!?!?!?!?!
Faved.

2783019 well i AM 12 and i love it!:pinkiehappy:

3714661 My sincere apologies for this. :fluttershyouch: I just didn't have it well planned out from the get-go, so it has some pretty shaky foundations.

Besides, I think a Markiplier fic would be funnier at this point. Markiplier vs the Ultimate Foe :pinkiecrazy:

3730308 ...you missed the blog post where I said I felt bad for writing it and apologized, didn't you? :ajbemused:

3735511 I usually just ride it out. It often helps because you have time to think about what you're going to do after you get past that one section before you actually get past it.

But don't take my advice. I'm horrible at this sort of thing. :derpytongue2:

4098335 Wow. Glad I could help. (Who knew you could fit so much happiness into one comment? :rainbowlaugh:)

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