For several centuries the Evil Lord Mumm-Ra has ruled the planet of Third Earth. But after several defeats by the forces of good his evil masters, the Ancient Spirits of Evil have had enough and decided to banish him to the astral plane were they plan to let him suffer for all time. Or will they. Will the ancient spirits decide to give Mumm-Ra one more chance at evil conquest but this time with new enemies to face.
This is the original Mumm-Ra of 1985 voiced by the great Earl Hammond if you don't know what that means then it's not important for T-Cat fans out there that is voice you should be picturing in your head when you read this. I have nothing against the 2011 version I just prefer classic Mumm-Ra myself.
(This is my first fan fiction, I'm not the bet speller, always looking for good feedback and CONSTRUCTIVE criticism.)
Finally a Thunder cats crossover.
2781031 I know I haven't seen one, I've been surprised isn't this show popular anymore? It has one the greatest villains of the 80's, in my opinion of course.
Oh yeah ,if anyone wants give me any suggestion on how the story should go please do not hesitate to give me some, always looking for suggestions.
Great story. This is the first ever Thundercat/MLP crossover i've read. I look forward to seeing where this goes.
this is getting good. also are there going to be thundercats in this story at all?
This story is good. Will any past generation villains like Tirek or Grogar be in this story?
2795764 Uh to be honest I've not seen any past generation of MLP so I do know if I would be able to get the character's core personalities down perhaps you could give me a summary of them and I'll see what I can do. I always say if I'm going to write down a character I want to give good justice to that character get to know them a little have a feel for the character.
Did you know that saying you don't own what you write about actually is legally worse for you?
2850124 No, but now I do.
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They probably wouldn't take it to court either way, but it goes from Copyright Infringement to Willful Copyright Infringement.
2850279 Ah I see I don't understand this law stuff, I'm pretty new to the Fan Fic world so It's a learning process.
Great chapter.
2870151 Thanks!
Once again great work. Will we find out why Mumm-Ra didn't finish thing's a thousand year's ago when he had the chance? Will we also find out why he was in Equestria in the first place back than?
2871787 Oh yes, I have plans
are we going to see any of the thundercats in this fic?
Ah Mumm-Ra, ever the Ham, and true to fashion, he never 'actually' gets defeated, he always has an out, and even if it looks like he lost, in truth, he gained something else: In this case, information on the Mane 6, insight into DisQord's existence, not to mention driving home the point that you do NOT dick around with the emissary of the Ancient Spirits of Evil.
One Question however: I'm guessing this is based off the TV series ending, and as such you haven't read the follow-up comics?
Good story so far - well established background connection, well narrated for the most part (I especially liked the description of Mum-Ra's landing on Equestria) and only a few minor errors (when you refer to people, it's 'their' and not 'there', and the desert is 'barren' and not 'baron').
Spelling errors aside this seems simply awesome so far! You`ve got Mumm-Ra`s personality down to a T. The speech patterns of some of the ponies are a little off, particularly fluttershy`s in the first chapter or so.
I especially loved how the elements of harmony are useless against Mumm-Ra as he is an integral piece of the Harmony puzzle.
The spelling wouldn't take to long to fix, though i must say it got continuously better towards the last chapter. The only mistake that really grated on me was the confusing of there and theirs [EG: The fridge is over THERE. The house wasnt really THEIRS.]
I really hope you continue this at some point, I searched for like an hour today and it seems this is the ONLY Thundercats MLP Crossover on the site!
You either continue this or I will kick your flank to the moon
. I love this fic. 
shame not more thundercats crossover, i hope you either come back to this or someone else take up the mantle.