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The mare at the bus stop.

the most beautiful mare in the world is at the bus stop. I really have nothing more to say.

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Silver Eyes

Silver Eyes #1 · Jun 26th, 2013 · · ·

Short, succient, simple slice of longing life, I like it

CosmicAfro

CosmicAfro #2 · Jun 26th, 2013 · · ·

Huh. For something so simple, it holds an elegance to it. Well crafted, I spotted no errors (due to somehow being deeply engrossed over one thousand words), and simply enjoyable. Part of it though reads off as wish fulfillment for a certain someone in the show, but since you'd only see that if you really thought about it for a moment, taking this far too seriously as I considered for a brief moment, I would disregard that.

A brief moment in time explained near-perfectly. Well done.

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