Cartoon Hangout

by dbzponyninja

Season 2 Episode 2 Superhero Night At The Cartoon Club

Cartoon Hangout Season Two Episode Two Superhero Night At The Cartoon Club by dbzponyninja Written on ‎June ‎6, ‎2014

Last time on Cartoon Hangout Mr. Krabs went to The Cartoon Club and asked several cartoon characters if they could spare a dime even though he didn't need it due to the fact that he is a greedy restraraunt owner so no one would spare a dime and after failing to get a dime several times he finally gave up and went back to Bikini Bottom. What happens next let's find out right now?

Tonight was Superhero Night at The Cartoon Club so all four Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles from the 2012- present show, the Teen Titans from Teen Titans Go!, The Avengers, The Justice League, The Powerpuff Girls from Powerpuff Girls, Kim Possible and Ron Stoppable from Kim Possible, Spiderman a.k.a. Peter Parker, Iron Fist a.k.a. Danny Rand, Nova a.k.a. Sam Alexander, Powerman a.k.a. Luke Cage and White Tiger a.k.a. Ava Ayala from Ultimate Spiderman, Hulk a.k.a. Bruce Banner, A Bomb a.k.a. Rick Jones, Skarr, She Hulk a.k.a. Jennifer Walters and Red Hulk a.k.a. General Thunderbolt Ross from Hulk and The Agents of S.M.A.S.H plus all six members of The Mane Six even though they aren't technically credited as superheroines but seeing as how they've saved all of Equestria seven times they are there regardless.

Anyway all these hero and heroines talked about the multiple times they saved both the entire world as well as the place that they live and they also ate food as well as played both darts and pool. The End.

Comments

[nodamnbrakes]

I don't even know what to say about this.

[Captain Joker]

Well... This. I don't think I've ever come across a story that was just so much... Nothing. This story is an absolute travesty, made even more so by the fact that this is a good idea! Do you have any idea how many hilarious moments could have come out of this story?
For example, you mention Ultimate Spider-Man. Spectacular Spider-Man was cancelled for that show. So is the Spectacular Spidey still around? How does he feel about having his show cancelled for Ultimate? Do you have any idea how hilarious an argument between those two characters would have been? You have a story where you can make animated television characters interact with one another, and you completely wasted it. I'm not trying to be mean, but this is the single worst story I've ever seen come out of a good idea.
Like the others have said, you seriously need to take some remedial writing classes. This is absolutely awful.

[dbzponyninja]

4565558 Hmm Spectacular Spidey talking to Ultimate Spidey this is a interesting idea that I've never thought about for some reason I think i'll use that in a future episode for this story/ series.

[Captain Joker]

4565578 Before you do that, you really need to learn how to write. Seriously, go and take a look online, see if there are any remedial writing classes in your area. Then go and take some creative writing classes, because you need to take both before you're going to be ready to write anything, period.