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Shining Star


Writing stories, drinking excessive amounts of coffee, traveling in the TARDIS, drawing for tumblr and a whole heap of other crap.

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New adventures and new worlds. The Elements of Harmony decide to explore the magical mirrors within the Crystal Palace to gain knowledge of the different worlds. Stepping through a portal again is exciting for Twilight and new for the other five. But landing in this new world was anything but good for the Mane Six. Now they're all stuck here as...

Humans.

Great.

Aang, Katara, Sokka and Toph are searching for the Flying Bison, Appa, in the safe city of Ba Sing Se but things don't go to planned when six benders show up lost and confused on their doorstep. Aang makes it his duty to protect the six girls form the Fire Nation no matter the cost. Even if one of the girls seems to be able to wield fire.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 145 )

Well Toph and Sokka seem a bit off. For one thing since when has Sokka had gears to turn. Also in that last sentence it should be they're

I see what u did with the types of ponies and thr nation their from

I can't recall ever seeing MLP crossed with Avatar: TLA before on this site. It's a shame because I always thought there was potential there.

I really wanna see where this goes.

2776058 Thanks for noticing. :pinkiehappy:

2776449 I tried looking for one once and couldn't find this type of story so i decided to write one! :derpytongue2: But the story will get a lot better as it progresses along, it's just I had to introduce a few things first, like what happened to the six and how they don't look that same at all. :twilightsheepish:

2775889 I guess you're right but it'll get better as it progresses along and I'll be adding in the lines from the show in here so it follows it smoothly. This was more just an introduction like I said above. :scootangel:

2776449 This is the fourth such one I've seen. The previous three were awful. We'll see if this one bucks the trend.

2777065 Could you send me a link to the other three so I can read them and not make the same mistakes? :applecry: Pwease?

2777099 Sorry, they were not worth reading past the first chapter so I've forgotten about them. I don't exactly keep things I don't like.

2777140 That's okay. I'll just try to keep things inresting then!

To be honest, i would have expected Twilight to be kind of like the Avatar, being the Element of magic and all...still, so far so good, please update soon

FINALLY! A real AtLA crossover!

Finally! I've been looking for an Avatar crossover (not that weird movie with blue aliens)
You have earned my favorite and :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy: 3 PP happies

2778034 Yeah, but with everyone making a bigger deal about it I slowly lost interest
It's about a man who can't walk being able to because his subconscioys is transferred into a big blue alien with a tail that can connect with a flying bird. He falls in love with the Chief's daughter and almost destroys the race.
Also, Sigourney Weaver is in it.

2778072 Don't worry I'll keep that in mind about keeping the in character. And thank you! :pinkiesmile: I'm glad you like it so far, I've just started working on the next chapter.

*slams head on a wall*, HOLY SHIT! *tackle hug*, THANK YOU!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy:

there's just one little detail that I have a problem with. How on earth does sokka know for sure that they are benders in the first place?

2777202 I'd say work on the grammar and breaks. You literally have a break in the middle of a sentence.

She almost looks like a Princess of sorts with that jewelled red crown and necklace of hers. But I wonder why Fluttershy and Rainbow

Dash wear the colour orange and those necklaces while Pinkie Pie and Applejack wear the colour green, all matching pairs according to your tribe species and though I and Twilight technically were both unicorns are two different colours?”

DUN DUN DUNNNNNN!!!!! ....Had to do it.

I've honestly been waiting for a crossover like this one, I really have.

Looks good so far. There aren't many mistakes and it is definitely interesting. I'm interested to see where this goes and am definitely looking forward to the next chapter.

i bet Twilight is no simple Fire-bender but a second Avatar, not only would that make sense (an alicorn has the magic of all three pony-species, the avatar has the magic of all bender-kinds) it would be hillarious when Aang finds out.
heck the clothes could be explained by the fact that a avtar has no special colors, but mostly wears the ones he was born into .... huh, that would mean Twilight would have to wear water-tribe clothes .... hmm.

I like this idea, can't wait for it to get a bit longer. (So I can read it for more than a few minutes before having to wait.)

My logic: MLP:FIM+Humanization=This can only be good
MLP+Humanization+Avatar=Instant Favourite:pinkiehappy:
In short: I liked it.
fim.413chan.net/fic/src/132906471391-you_have_my_attentio.jpg

*Reads Story*
So flipping Awesome!!!:pinkiehappy:
*Reads comments*
*Goes to click the button to go to the second chapter*
It....I-it's not th-there......:rainbowderp:



NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:raritycry:

I DEMAND MORE OR I WILL EAT YOUR SOUL WITH SOY SAUCE AND A HAMSTER.

Well what do you know? A new Avatar crossover popped up. Linky for you.

2784207 That was so good!! :pinkiehappy: Thanks for sharng t wth me!

2784417 Those last words nearly gave me a seizure.

2784550 I loved it!! I can't wait for the sequel :raritywink:

When comes next chapter

great story now to make this story more asome is porbably have a picture of wht the mane six looks like and more chapters

2787199 Thank you! :pinkiehappy:I'm actually working on the cover today! I woke up and said I'm going to do it, straight after school. :twilightsheepish: Though it will be hand drawn cause I just can't get the right look through digital art. But as for more chapters, the school holidays for us Australians are starting today so I'll have plenty of time to write to my hearts content. :derpytongue2:

If twilight becomes a better avatar than Aang I will GRILL you

so let see

the earthponies are earth benders

the pegasi are air benders

rarity is a water bender

and twilight is a fire bender

did i get it right?

So far so good and given Twilight is an alicorn it would make sense for her to be a avatar not just a firebender. Though fire nation as the one she is from makes sense given what happened in the first episode and in Feeling Pinkie Keen when her mane and tail turned into fire. It just fits.

2791029 :fluttershyouch: I'm scared...

2792021 Yes you do sir, what you said is correct. :pinkiesmile:

2792829 I thought it fit too. :rainbowdetermined2: And why does everyone say, "is she going to be the Avatar?"?!

2793408 because she is a alicorn people assume

and yay!:yay:

Comment posted by Gaven deleted Jun 30th, 2013

I almost got mad at you because your the Author of Your the Father! Which I follow.
I shall instead thank you for making this story.

2799799 Why would you be mad that I write both 'The Four Elements' and 'You Are The Father!'? :derpyderp2:

But also thank you!! I hope you continue to like both my stories!

2802474 I was mad the chapter was short. Less mad after i noticed you wrote both.

2802787 Oh! That's okay you were mad! :derpytongue2: I just got a bit too absorbed into this story to really write the other. But I'm glad you like them both. :pinkiehappy:

Could use a little more subtlety, but the fact you basically have a monopoly on last air bender crossovers mean’s you get and instant fave.

The only spelling mistake I found was in your authors note:

Anyway, live you all! xoxo

I'm thinking that should be love
Anyways, great chapter!

i dont think i can handle this right now im gonna put it on my watch list

So far best Avatar:TLA Crossover I have read. There are a few not many but they are mostly just the ideas of the show not the show itself. Keep up the good work and I can state this. Ty Lee would have a very hard time dealing with Pinkie Pie if they fight. Mainly because in my own opinion I don't think Ty Lee's fighting style would work on the hyperactive physics breaker and now earth bender.
Edit: Actually now that I think about it Pinkie Pie is a physics bender. Something that even Aang in the Avatar State might have trouble defeating.

This is a great idea, but PLEASE edit, the grammar mistakes are everywhere. I don't mean to be rude, I simply wish to see this story in its best possible state.

2811566 Is that good or bad? :rainbowhuh: Sorry I'm a bit slow. :twilightblush::heart:

2812621 I think if I had based this after Lord Ozai was defeated, they would be BFF's!! :pinkiehappy: They are both so peppy and happy all the time and can do some amazing things. For Pinkie Pie it's defying physics and Ty Lee it's doing chi blocking and her acrobatics.

2813007 Thanks, I'm glad you like it and I did go over it nearly five times so I thought I would be safe but I guess not. :twilightoops: I might have to find an editor for this in the end. Also don't worry about being rude I've had people just come right out and say "this unoriginal, boring, your grammar is shit and you are the world's worst author." Here on FIMFiction just not on this story. But what can you do but delete the comment I guess. But anyway thanks for the comment! :heart:

hey thanks man for the pictures :twilightsmile: and good chp the only thing i would suggest is than u may want to have the main six eye color stay the same as b4. But it ur story and im just making a suggestion

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