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Tchernobog


Complete AppleDash fanatic!

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Applejack, Twilight, and Rainbow Dash really enjoy each other's company. So much so that some ponies are beginning to wonder about them. Twilight and Applejack are a couple after all, so its a bit unusual that Rainbow always seems to be invited along. But sometimes, a couple is more than two.


Thanks to Steel Resolve, Lycan_01 and Macdjord for editing and brainstorming!
Cover art by Graystripe64.

Chapters (8)
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Comments ( 909 )

Chapter 1 is go! :pinkiecrazy: chapter 2 is around the corner, too~
Should be in the next few days. I'm off on vacation for a week, and I don't know how much internet I'll have access to!

And yes, I am using comments for author's notes on chapters. I hate how the author's notes thing looks like here. :ajbemused:

Ah, the promised AppleDashLight is upon us finally! Time to set aside everything else I've got to indulge in the greatness!

WHOO HOO!

It's out!

~Skeeter The Lurker

Huzzah! Polygamous ponies! I will be sure to read this ASAP. :pinkiehappy:

Welp it's got TwiJack so I pretty sure I'm contractually obligated to read this.

I love the idea of drunken twilight this is just so wonderful can't wait for more :pinkiehappy:

6 comments, 18 votes, 1 view?

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The view counter tends to lag a bit, whereas the comments and votes are tallied immediately.

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An excellent start. I can see this is going to be another quality Tchernobog masterpiece, with just one minor error:

She gave her Dash an innocent smile

Rarity's being a bit possessive there. :P

I like how it starts with TwiJack, as opposed to TwiDash or AppleDash.

A wild Polyamory Fic appeared!

Leo Archon used Upvote!

Leo Archon used Favorite!

They're super effective!

Just curious, but did anyone else notice the title of the book that Twi's reading? :twilightblush: :rainbowlaugh: :applejackunsure:

Oh Tchernobog, please teach me the secrets of your shipping ways...:raritydespair:

Great story so far; you've definitely figured out how to show rather than tell, and the details you've given of Dash's relationship with Twilight and Applejack paint a very vivid picture indeed.

At this point, I'm betting that Twilight and Applejack are completely aware of this (though the verdict is still out about whether they think of it in a romantic sense), and thoroughly enjoying it. Rarity and Fluttershy are the ones trying to apply logic to a complex but satisfying relationship, and they're likely to figure out that love (in many different forms) has about as much logic as Pinkie Pie (which is to say, tons of internally consistent logic with no respect for externally imposed rules of sensibility).

Oh my sweet Christ that's a terrifying cover image. It looks like John Kricfalusi if he had a modicum of talent. The better realized drawing with those expressions... it stares into the black pit of my SOUL.

:twilightoops:

Tuple is the word. :pinkiehappy:
(not actually, but seeing how many poly people are geeky, it would be cool if that was the word :twilightblush:)

"A fast metabotulism"

Pfffhahahaha!

I enjoyed the depiction of their relationship in The Mailbox, but this format feels much better for getting into all the messy details of such a relationship. Fav'd.

Heh, okay, yeah, that was funny.

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Have an up-vote, plus a little minor correction nit-picking:

Okay, so, we’re all running through Whitetail forest Woods, right?

"She gave her Dash an innocent smile as the pegasus eyed her warily."

I thought Rainbow belonged to Applejack and Twilight at this point. Now Rarity's getting into it, too?

I gotta say, I love it when RD is the one crushing. And here she's crushing for two. :rainbowkiss: Three way fluff ahoy!

I am so excited for this. My phone cannot adequately express it. :D

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Woops, corrected those. Thanks!

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It just made the most sense to me. Bats showed how it's possible with TwiDash first, but I find it a bit harder to see it with AppleDash first. That, or couldn't think of a story to fit it :twilightsheepish:

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:pinkiehappy: The artist put in a few nice details, yeah! And yes, the smiles are ever so slightly odd, but hey, i like the pic. AJ looks ridiculously awesome, and Dash entirely too relaxed. :rainbowlaugh:

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:scootangel:

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Have an upvote, sir! :rainbowlaugh:

3054393 Haunting... my... dreams... :rainbowderp: :raritydespair:

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I shall show you how it works with AppleDash first, good sir. At least at some point I will. :rainbowderp::applejackunsure::twilightblush:

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Looking forward to it! I think i saw it discussed on the forums somewhere... maybe not yours, but someone had a story idea!

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I should hope you would remember mine, since you helped me brainstorm bits of the outline. :derpytongue2:

3054393 Obviously, the way to start it with AppleDash is this.

:rainbowkiss: Hey, Twilight's hot.

:ajbemused: Dash, we've been over this...

:rainbowwild: Let's have some fun with her!

:ajsleepy: You're not gonna let this die, are you?

:rainbowdetermined2: Nope. Sexy time.

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...I did? My brain is made of swiss cheese, i remember nothing. :pinkiesad2:

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:rainbowlaugh: Sounds about right.

I feel like there will be some Flutterity at the end, due to the fact that Aloe mentioned "ponies not even knowing they're in love until someone else mentions it".

Good story thus far, looking forward to reading more! :twilightsmile:

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A planned sequel to a certain other fic of mine you had a pretty big hand in. :rainbowwild:

And so it begins ! Lets see how this will work out. Hopefully Rarity's gonna fix this mess... Right ?

This. This is awesome and completely adorable. Especially constantly-preening Dash. Eagerly awaiting the rest.

Oh dear indeed.

I look forward to the continuation.

Threeway? awwww yisssss. :heart::heart:

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Can't leave Pinkie out! :rainbowkiss:

I'm really liking how you've started this out. There really aren't that many polyamorous relationship stories that involve any kind of developed plot line, rather than just a lot of the other kind of plot. I also think the pairing here is a quite an interesting dynamic, especially because you put Twi and AJ together to start and RD is coming in later. Really looking forward to the rest :pinkiehappy:

I Like This :ajsmug::rainbowkiss::twilightblush:

Polyamory is best amory.

Comment posted by Tommy deleted Aug 16th, 2013

That. was. hilarious!! have a like:twilightsmile:

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The preening was entirely too adorable to write in. And it's not done with yet. :rainbowderp:

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Another person's story is not the place to ask for an editor. I'm answering your comment, but I'll also be deleting it. Go to reddit's "my little fanfic" subreddit instead, you might find help there.

3054964 tnx and sorry if i offend you

See this. Interested, I click it. I see you made it. This is definetively a must read! :pinkiehappy:

It's always a VERY good day when another polyamorous story pops up on fimfiction, considering how far and few between they are. And wouldn't you know it: it's a well-paced one.

Interestingly enough, it's not just the poly relationship itself I'm interested in this time around. Rarity and Fluttershy, and how they handle the relationship, is also a source of great interest. Rarity's highly idealized notion of romance and her tendency for drama is especially ripe with potential, as she seems like she'd have the toughest time reconciling this rather different type of relationship with her own pre-conceived notions and "expertise" on romance. Fluttershy's dealing with Rainbow should also be a treat, not to mention Twilight and Applejack coming to terms with the idea.

I have a feeling feeling this is going to be a great fic. Looking forward to future updates.

Hilarious, cute and hnng in equal measure. Liked and faved, must be continued!

I didn't think it'd be Tchernobog who got me into Appledashlight :O

ok, im not a fan of three way relationships, but i swore i would give this a chance and i will. time to read! :ajsmug:

SHL

Meeen, this is freaking great!!!! And it's only the beginning!! You got one more follower, sir :pinkiehappy:

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