For fear of rejection, she has been silent for years, never admitting her affection. But now they have grown ever closer, and she has learned how to trust her friends. Tonight, she will tell her everything.
Not the G1 Sparkler. Nor the G3.5 Sparkler. Nor the G4 Draft Sparkler. Nor the Winningverse Sparkler (even though she's awesome).
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Well, no matter your constraints, you did very well. Bravo!
Lying, not laying.
"Neither could not"? That's a double negative.
I was expecting something a bit worse than that. Glad to say I was wrong.
I was hoping it was gonna be longer to the part where it shows her about to tell "her love" about her feelings...oh well i can't get everything i want..
2770642 love is different for different people....
Wait, what?
I like this. Short, simple, and nicely written too. The ending is very Fluttershy - made me smile
Huh, wow - I didn't even notice until you mentioned it. That's actually pretty cool, well done!
You used the word mane to describe her hair. Pony vocabulary op
2786124 u may be right
2786188
I think he was trying to say that my prose was so purple you could stick a horn on it and call it Twilight Sparkle.
2786191im sorry?
Nice story, if a disappointing ending. xp But altogether not as sad as it could be. Very sweet. Just wish there was a second chapter to wrap it up. xD
This is beautiful.
Why so short? I expected more.... or at least a 2nd chapter to wrap it all up...
But still good
Nooo u must finish
I demand a chapter 2!!