Epilogue pt2: Behold a Pale Horse
Destruction sat upon his throne looking over his scars and cursing the land that not only defied him once but twice. “It is only a matter of time…” he growled, looking to a globe of Equestria. “I will regain my power and I will destroy that damned land…” he smashed the globe on the floor. “Even if it takes me another six thousand years!”
“I don’t think we’ll have to wait THAT long, big guy…” a voice echoed through the dark throne room. “In fact I think we’ll only need thirty years tops!”
“Shadow…” Destruction bellowed. “It has been over one year since I felt your psychotic presence, I thought the young daughter of Omnipotent slayed you…”
“You can NOT kill what is already dead, Destruction…” The Shadow said rolling his eyes. “Remember you gave a soul flesh, bone and blood… not the opposite and as you know you can’t kill a soul.”
“Why have you returned now?” Destruction asked. “Why did you not aid me in my fight against our common enemy?”
“Because the enemy of my enemy…” The Shadow responded, smiling menacingly. “Is my friend ...” The shadow flew onto Destruction’s chest staring him down. “Do you really think simple ponies could stand against you?” he said walking towards Destruction’s head, “Hell if you put one together you might get a weak alicorn… even IF it was those three…”
“WHAT DID YOU DO?!” Destruction roared throwing the shadow into a nearby wall. “WHAT DID YOU DO TO ME?!”
“The biggest mistake you ever made…” The Shadow said spitting blood out of the side of his mouth, “Was me…” he teleported back onto Destruction, stating him down. “Do you have any clue how hard it is to play the psychotic pawn of a more powerful being?” he asked avoiding another attack from Destruction, “Well to tell you the truth… I was already psychotic… but THAT’S not the issue!” the shadow teleported onto Destruction’s head and leaned up on his crest, “of the four thousand years you’ve had me as your ‘pee-on’ I’ve spent four thousand of them slowly draining power from you…” he rubbed Destruction’s head like a puppy, “and as for the elements of honor, I didn’t expect the anticlimactic hero to remember his little slut… but I managed…” he rubbed his chin in deep thought. “Also didn’t expect him to rip my horn off and make a poor attempt to kill me, but the performance was Oscar worthy no doubt…”
“You arrogant… pathetic… useless creature!” Destruction roared, trying to slash The Shadow off his head, but he teleported out of his claws path, Destruction’s crest feel to the floor, spraying black blood across the room. He roared in agony as the shadow floated over him and laughed uncontrollably.
“I CAN’T believe you FELL for that!” he said between breaths, “I can…I can hardly breathe that’s so freaking funny!”
“You are still NOTHING compared to me!” Destruction roared, “NOTHING!”
“Oh, I’m something…” The Shadow said smiling. “Something that will end you for eternity...”
“I cannot die!” Destruction bellowed. “My power is infinite!”
“You and I both know you’re wrong on one of those counts…” The Shadow said slowly making his way to the struggling titan. “Your power IS infinite… but you can die… the power can simply be transferred into another being.”
“One does not simply transfer such power…” Destruction growled, “You-“
Destruction was cut short by a spell that slashed across his throat, he reached for it in an attempt to stop it but the blood pouring from the wound couldn’t be stopped.
“Oh… one DOES simply…” The Shadow said showering himself in Destruction’s black blood.
The dark powers flowed from Destruction’s body into The Shadow’s. He laughed psychotically as Destruction tried to fight the transfer helplessly, but after a few agonizing minutes, it was over. Destruction was gone and only the shadow remained.
“So… much… POWER!” The Shadow yelled flying into the air, “UNLIMITED POWER!” lighting shot from his hooves and broken horn.
He suddenly stopped and floated back to the ground, “Now…” he said looking around, “what does one need to have to be an ultimate evil…” he thought hard for a long while then it finally hit him. “I know!” he said excitedly, “Minions! Evil ones!” he looked around the hall for some inspiration, “I could just stick with shadow fiends…” he said summoning one, he looked it over toughly, “but I can’t have witty and cliché bad guy banter with a shadow fiend…” he crushed the fiends head between his hooves, and continued to think, then it hit him again. “Damn I’m an idiot…” he said throwing the headless body over his shoulder across the room, “RESURECTION!” he shouted shooting lighting in every direction. After a few seconds two ponies stood before him.
“Hi Guilty Spark…” he said waving to them like a little filly, “hey Sun Screech…”
“Lord Shadow!” Sun Screech said groveling at his hooves; “I beg you spare me of your wrath! I didn’t know you still lived!”
“MY wrath?!” The Shadow said surprised. “Why would I punish you for a job well done?”
“What?” Spark and Sun Screech said simultaneously.
“You did what I wanted you to do…” The Shadow said smiling, “you did kill at least ONE of the bearers of honor…” he wrapped them up in his hooves, “and it was the most powerful one! I couldn’t ask for better little traitors!”
“But… uh… my lord…” Sun Screech said, “he… he… didn’t stay… dead…”
“I know…” The Shadow said blankly, “I saw…”
“Then that would bring the logical conclusion to our mission as a failure,” Spark said, “because an objective momentarily held does not accomplish the goal.”
“Well… if you put it THAT way…” The Shadow said pondering, “I guess you DID fail… and I SHOULD punish you…”
“Exactly,” Spark said, “we-“
“SHUT UP! YOU IMBOSILE!” Sun Screech said covering Spark’s mouth, but it was too late the shadow had already started charging his attack.
“I’ll go fifty/fifty on the two of you…” he said with his eyes glowing bright red, “half reward, the other punishment…” he fried his attack hitting both ponies squarely. They shrieked in pain as the shadow’s spell coursed through them. Once done the two looked to one another and gasped in horror.
“What… WHAT HAPPENED TO ME?!” Sun Screech shouted looking at his hooves, his whole body was covered in blisters and open infected sores continually leaking fluid.
“I gave you some power…” the shadow said walking towards him, “you now have the ability to spread sickness wherever you go… but you will feel the sickness for all eternity…” he looked him over for a few seconds, “Now what to name you…”
“I like Sun-“
“No!” The Shadow said bopping him on the nose, “New look, new name…” he continued to think about it, “Sick Donkey… No… Pestilence… Closer, but still no… Oh I have it!” he grabbed Sun Screech and twirled him around, “I’ll call you OUTBREAK!”
“Thank you Lord Shadow…” he coughed.
“And as for you my, bony unicorn…” he said dropping Outbreak and picking up Spark. “How does Frail Frame sit with you?”
“Very appropriate…” Frail Frame replied weakly, “Given that I am in a severe state of starvation…”
“Well you ARE going to spread famine across all Equestria when we get started…” the shadow said rubbing his head. He placed Pitch Black next to Outbreak and looked at them both for a few seconds. “DAMNIT!” he shouted, “I still need ONE more!”
“If I may make a suggestion…” Outbreak said raising his hoof. “You could resurrect a random pony and-“
“NO!” the shadow said slapping Outbreak across the room. “I have a better idea; I’ll just resurrect some random pony from the grave!”
“A wise decision, lord.” Frail Frame said.
“I know…” The Shadow said proudly, “because I thought of it…” he cracked his neck and steadied himself. “Here… we… GO!” he said as lighting fired from his broken horn, resurrecting a single earth pony.
“Wha-What in tarnation?!” Ridge Cracker yelled looking around, “The HELL happened?! I-I was wit’ meh friends… meh family!”
“Sorry to trouble you good sir…” The Shadow said to get his attention. “But could you please join me and my cohorts in a rampant attempt to kill everything in Equestria?”
“WHAT?!” Ridge Cracker exclaimed. “Ain’t NO way in hell I’d be caught dead doin’ that!”
“But they betrayed you… left you for dead.” The Shadow said walking next to him. “You were just a convenient distraction for Greatsword so he could run away…”
“Yer a liar…” Ridge Cracker said, “Ol’ Greatsword’d never-“
“For the love of nothing shut up!” The Shadow said grabbing Ridge Cracker, forcing him to stare into his eyes. “Just look!”
Ridge Cracker did his best to resist, but the shadow was too much his entire body became filled with unending hate toward all ponies and a lust for combat and blood. The Shadow dropped Ridge Cracker on the ground; he looked up to the shadow with pure rage in his heart.
“I will KILL ‘em all…” he growled glaring at the shadow, “Everypony will DIE by my hoof…”
“Nice… VERY nice…” The Shadow said pleased, “Bloodshed…” the shadow made his way up the stairs to Destruction’s throne. He then turned around and sat upon the massive chair.
“Lord Shadow…” Outbreak said, “What shall we do-“
“I never want any of you to call me ‘the shadow’ ever again…” he said as the blackness fell off of him, revealing a pale well-muscled alicorn underneath. “I prefer the name…” his eyes began to glow an eerie mix of black and red. “Eternal Rest…”
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Uh-huh. Ok so I hate this story
Holy liers Batman! That man lies!
Fuck you Robin you ruined the surprise.
Don't judge me I'm a Discord.
Holy pufuckles! Two epilogues? That's just messed up man.
Now... Launch the children! BWAHAHAHAHA now they will have to fight! YES MORE PAIN. Good plot.
Listen to San Fransico by the Mowgli's this is the song I thought of at the end. Mostly because that was the song I was listening to.
Dude I found Dante!
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Holy sh- *BLAM* DIE ROBIN DIE!!!
Yay and that was how Equestria was made.
By a giant flying unicorn. Seems legit. Absolutely legit... Heh. Heh.
Heh.
What's up with you and from/form. Like 6 times?
2774282 Well sorry you hated it, can't please everyone I guess, if you do have suggestions to improve it in anyway I'm all ears.
Side note Omnipotent is technically GOD so yeah, and you are quite the random individual, not that that's a bad thing it makes me smile. I also thank you for your honesty at least you didn't lie about how you felt about it.
2772342 so your OC's are foils of you?
2778691 No... not exactly, but I hold the belief that when you design an OC there is a little bit of you that stays with the character... Almost all OCs showcased are nothing like in actuality, but there are moments where they would react as I would in a certain situation.
2778718 No I meant his OCs specifically. I fully agree that OCs contain a bit of their writer in them even if it is by being what they are not. My OCs reflect my desires and dreams quite closely.
2779176 That's what she said
2788747 HE, the unicorn and the earth pony are stallions... hope I cleared that up a bit
2788880 I liked it just sayin. Also the reason for me to take so long to respond is because I read your comment... At like 4 in the morning for me. So... I didn't really register it until now. Sorry.
I thoroughly enjoyed this. Let me know of you elaborate on this story!
2790554 lol
... NO... 
the innuendos come later.
2790451 Thank you for liking the story, I'm kinda surprised that I've gotten any good praise on account it's my first shot at anything like this, as for continuation, there are several short stories on my page that occur after the main story line, I'm currently working on a flashback short involving Commander Garrison, two prequels are in my head, one of them starring Armor Smith and the other The Shadow. A sequel... now that's a subject for another time
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You had a few issues here and there with grammar or spelling, but to be completely honest; it just didn't matter to me. I was entertained, the story was fresh(!), and I came to care for your characters. I wanted them to win, I couldn't wait to read the next chapter and I even got a little misty-eyed here and there! I can't wait to see what the future holds...
2802516 Hey it's your thing...
2802812
Oh I totally did 
2802875 we went inside the mind of a character who blames himself for all the death that surrounds him... what you expect? A complementary basket of cupcakes, rainbows and puppies?
Oh my God I need to read the second story to this one one when it's being written because I love this story with all the love of reading because it had awesome characters, good villains, and great way of writing the fights, making you love each characters which made it easier for them to die, and most of all that it was 61 CHAPTERS LONG!!!!!! You are awesome.
2803278 Well I'm Glad you liked it so much, and if you want to get started on book two, chapter one is out right now.
and when you said awesome characters in well written fight scenes making it easier on you when they died... did you mean it was harder for you because they died?
I'm going to pretend this epilogue doesn't exist. I don't like sequels and I prefer my Villans to stay dead. Despite that complaint, I have to say that I am quite impressed. You have kept writing this despite the fact that it has fewer views than some of the stuff I wrote. It was not perfect but you managed to keep me engrossed throughout a sixty chapter story. You have quite the WILL if I do say so myself.
2803617 If you believe in something strongly enough... It really doesn't matter how many like it or hate it, as long as you had fun doing it
2802961 Yes. That is exactly what I expect.
2871649 hmmmm... I have no idea what you're talking about
2871749 LOL
BEST.....STORY.....EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
>no twilicorn
yay
3211156 ... I don't even remember posting that comment.
Also I'm a sarcastic idiot who likes to piss off good authors. Just a hint.
3214583
You think I'm good?!?!
3214589 well, yeah I was the fourth person who read your fic and actually bothered to remember that so yeah.
3757488 I thought as much. I've only read one other story by you, aside from this one, that one being Luna/Aedan. The writing was fantastic in it. I'm forty-nine chapters in the EoH at the moment and I have to say, after chapter twenty-five or so, it really picked up and your writing got noticeably better. In any case, thank you for writing these stories. I've fallen in love with both of them so far.
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Well I hope you know that I'm glad to hear that from a person like you. Honesty is something I hold in high regard and when someone tells me that it's good or bad and gives me a reason why I like that more than any thumbs up or favorite, so please do continue and make sure that honest opinion of yours is let out as often as possible.
And just so you know... A Whole New Responsibility is a sequel to my most popular piece... The Princess and I which tells the tale from when Aedan first met Luna to their eventual romance.
I wouldn't mind you looking over that as well, because as I have stated before... I love readers like you, you make sure that I keep to a certain standard, one that has made me produce quality fictions that the majority of people can enjoy.
3757614 The Princess and I is what got me hooked on your stories to begin with. I ate the story up, as well as the 3 chapters of the sequel. Honestly, aside from minor typos and errors here and there, your storytelling felt perfect to me. I usually try to have some form of constructive criticism, but nothing came to mind for them. I do plan to re-read them tomorrow though, so I will try to think of something you can improve on. As for what is good about The Princess and I, and the sequel, your dialogue, is wonderful. The interactions between your characters feel like they have the perfect blend of emotion. It also helps that it isn't ever bogged down by being to serious, or to lighthearted. You've alternated them very well.
Can anybody tell me if this story is food so far or not? Im just asking cuz I dont wanna start reading something then not finish cuz I didnt like it xp
4432493 shit I meant good not food im a fucking idiot x.x
Ha! Liam Neeson... For me it was Optimus prime!
So many great actors and actresses!! But DARN IT, I also have Adam West, George Newburn, and Larry the Cable Guy in some of my WIP FiMfics! How did that happen?! Aside from the both of us having good taste in who we "cast"