Facing your fears can be tough. But when it's national dental hygiene week at school, what will a scared Scootaloo do? Will Scootaloo be able to make it through the week and not have to face her fears? Will her friends find out? Will Dr. Colgate find out? Will Scootaloo be able to face her fears? The story, answers all.
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Everything happened really fast with no build up and the wall of text is an issue.
You have an intresting concept but what you've written doesn't do this idea justice.
I'd consider getting an editor and completly revising this.
2773125 where/ how do I get one? I forgot
2773157 I just added it to a group called "Looking for Editors". You can also post a blog requesting one. Basically just let people know you're looking for one.
2773268 ok thanks!
2773268 When do I know I have one?
I kinda don't know because it's my first time having my story edited by someone else.
2779292 I'm not really sure.
2780481 crud.
i liked this story very much
but you AREN'T continuing it anymore. so now i feel sad 
laters and i hope you continue
4612310 Don't worry. I just have writers block. I'm planning on continuing, just not now.
But I'm glad you liked it!
I guess after 3 years you won't be finishing it, but that's a shame, as it has a good theme :o)
7254355 yeah I haven't really gotten the inspiration to write it, and I passed story rights to a friend.
7254355 and thank you
scared of the dentist scoots?
gah freakin cliffhangers *does a dramatic fall* WHY?!?!?!