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TheRocketMan062


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Equestria is coming apart at the seams. Discord cultists and Terrorists claim the lives of more and more innocent ponies every day. The Royal and Lunar Guard have been all but annihilated, and the Mane 6 have been forced into hiding. As if all that wasn't enough, ancient evils are awakening.
It should be an even fight...

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 5 )

Interesting premise and i do enjoy fusion fics. For suggestions the tab button is always good when starting new paragraphs, I wouldn't mind if you made it so that Luna didn't make the Spartans on her own having more like a small army of scientists doing a lot of the work. But i am just a reader and not the author

Can do, I actually have a good back story for the Luna and the Spartans, and I will be posting it soon!

A message to all of those out there that like to dislike stories, AND NOT EXPLAIN WHAT CAUSED THEM TO DISLIKE IT AND LEAVE A WRITER LIKE ME SCRAMBLING TO FIGURE OUT WHATS WRONG WITH THEIR STORY...

I'll see you all in pony hell:pinkiecrazy:

You should have the Spartans end in the way the noble 6 did, in one big last stand to kill as many as possible before death

2761315 Have one of your Spartans kick them into its mouth

Spartan style

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