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It's prologue, not epilogue.
I dont like your story :c
Wat.
Midnight Blaze? Author is Midnight Haze? Sounds self inserted. But I'm going to assume it's not. Also, the tortured pony soul thing? Dark and Edgy? Instant rape in the first chapter? That's funny.
Try better next chapter, ill give this a chance
2761062 yeah i just relised this was 2:30 when i submitted it
2761626 thats alright what exactly dont you like about it
2762504 its not
2763374 Not to mention that you didn't try in the grammar department. You should go to a proofreading group. Also, why would you only write eight words over the minimum, did you even try?
2763374
There wasn't anything funny :c
2763427 well thats why its tagged sad
2763387 ok its short i know and i have said i have never written before most of my other chapters im rewriting and editing and hopefully im going to get better
ok i got someone to edit for me and added a bit should be better now
Hmmm this pleases me
2774588 yay
2774693 I will wait for events to play out then when I belive I can sit in the shadows no more OBLIVION WILL FUCK SHIT UP
next chapter now!!!!
wow intense, I love it
Fucking great oh and for those of you wondering who O is it is me well my character from my story me and blaze are doing a crossover later on so stay tuned and this is fucking gold mate keep up the great work
tied him to a chair kinkiy anyway good job and keep up the good work