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Scootaloo has been bullied for the last time! When all Scootaloo wants is to be appreciated a nightmare comes true and could ruin the lives of all of her friends and possibly her new sister.


Scootaloo!

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 16 )
Comment posted by La Barata deleted Jun 26th, 2013
Comment posted by Applecrisp deleted Jun 26th, 2013
Comment posted by La Barata deleted Jun 26th, 2013

I can see the potential~:scootangel:

Nice story! But you have a couple of minor grammar mistakes here and there nothing big. Excited to continue reading ;D

2779529 thanks I'll look over it again glad you enjoyed

Great Idea cant wait to see more :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

this is a really interesting idea, can't wait for more :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by Applecrisp deleted Nov 20th, 2013
Comment posted by IanRises deleted Jun 26th, 2023

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Currently working on the next chapter, its halfway done. Hopefully It will be finished by tonight. I want to at least get one chapter out to show new material before people lose all hope, so the quality wont be like the first two chapters. Not to mention my editor quit on me.

After seeing that this story hadn't been updated for three and a half years, I had to read the lot. Pretty good! Scoots sounds like an athlete under the influence of drugs... performance enhanced, but at the cost of her 'normal' personality. I wonder who that voice is? Whatever it is, I bet it doesn't have her best intentions at heart. :twilightoops:
Anyway, I'm gonna follow this like an ice cream van. Also, if you need a new editor, give me a holler... I'm pretty good at that, if I say so myself... :twilightsmile:

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