Russian Translation done by RainbowTurtleDash.
Rainbow Dash is on her death bed after a horrific accident takes place. The dying Pegasus calls upon two friends, Pinkie Pie and Gilda the Griffon, to keep her company in her final days.
Begrudgingly, the two enemies work through their differences in order to fulfill Rainbow Dash's last wishes: for them to be friends. Will Gilda and Pinkie be able to set their differences aside? Or will their grudges hold strong, even when their best friend is watching?
Chapters (5)
Oh.. crap.
2758748 Hopefully that is a good "Oh crap." :3
I can't say that I've seen the idea before, so that's interesting...
I honestly don't have much to say since this story is in such an early stage, but if I were to say something, it would be to stop colour coding each character's lines, as it can get somewhat distracting and kind of killed the mood for me.
Maybe we could get a little more background information as well. :P
Those are just my thoughts, feel free to disagree. Either way, I think I'll follow this to see how it comes along, as it's always nice to see a story develop, as well as a writer's skills.
2758779 I completely understand, Thanks for the advice! I was worried the colour coding might be distracting, so I think I may change that.
The background between the characters is going to emerge in the more heart-touching parts.
I love the way you ended that chapter, very heartwarming words
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2760095 Thank you very much!
I was wondering just what Slice of Life included, but now I know. And yes, there shall be some rocky seas and sweet moments between the two old enemies.
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The feels.
Manly tears.. have been shed.
2761756 And there's nothing wrong with that.
This shall be added to my list of stories that are SUPER sad.
2761841 Thank you!
I try.
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Well, you're right up there with 'My Little Dashie' and 'My Number One Assistant'. If you haven't read them, you should. They are VERY sad. Like this one.
P.S. Might want to change the status from Incomplete to Complete. Also, those are horrible doctors, saying she has two-three days left. Then she dies that night.
2761887 I only joined yesterday, so I haven't had the chance to read many. I shall look into those though, they sound very interesting.
I know right?
I made her die early because Rainbow was in so much pain she sort of just 'let go'. Like, dying was a relief but she was afraid to.
I hate you...
Its hard to make me cry... but you did.... thank you.... for making me cry..but i still hate you for it... but stilll..... thankyou 
2762726 Your welcome?
Nicely written, even if it did bring tears to my eyes.
Good job with this. you communicated the emotion very well. i got misty when pinkie sang the lullaby to dash as she took her last few breaths.
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Aww, thanks.
2767817 Oh noes... that scene... makes me emotional!
Thank you. :3
I enjoyed this quite alot... The feels went to the moon on this one, I would have to say the "What was the point of smiling if the one pony who gave you your first smile was dead?" bit was a real hard hitter for me.
2769361 Thank you very much!
Yeah, that one hit me in the feels too. Glad you liked it!
2762734 You bastard... DO YOU KNOW HOW HARD IT IS TO MAKE EVEN A TEAR SHOW UP ON ME!
well now you do congrats and I mean it nicely
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Haha, thanks? And your welcome? 
2770450 No sir you are welcome... May Dashie fly in peace now.
2770456 (I am a lady
) 
Indeed, rest in peace Dashie.
2770550 Oops
2770554 It's okay! How would you have known anyway?
Now you know!
WHAT?! This is your first story?! You seem like you made plenty of stories to make such a good story!
This pained me so much..
The ending was so beautiful!
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Really? Thanks. This was my first story. And I am glad you enjoyed it!
2774854 agree made me cry
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Aww.
2776451 question could you continue the story some how?
2777008 I think after I finish up my other story: Her Invention, I may make a sequel to this.
2777092 k sounds awesome
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I teared up when Pinkie was saying her final goodbyes to RD.
I have a challenge from a friend to read this and not cry
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Really? Wow! Did you win?
2778397 you're not alone. I cried during the lullaby
1. yes sequel this.
2. it should be a gilda pinkie fic becomeing fri through shared loss. and mabey just mabey gilda being able to bring some dashy style smiles back to our pink friend with new memories.
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Sounds good!
This was crazy sad
(...But I really enjoyed it!)
2762726 i agree it is extremely hard to make me cry but you managed it oh god i teared up through the whole thing
2951111 Teehee.
You made be make a puddle of tears it was that sad
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Haha, glad you enjoyed it!