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Blue Turtle


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The Time before the Wars
A time when things were simple
A time when me and my friends
Could do what we wanted
Without worrying about what we must
Or When I was worried about losing the ponies I loved.

Before Luna turned into NightMare Moon and was banished the sisters lived in harmony, Setting the Sun and raising the moon accordingly. But even before that they had a strong bond, Sure sometimes they got mad at eachother but it was nothing that a little negotiation from a certain green kirin couldn't handle. As they grew though, the tasks they had to take on became more and more serious and sadly though, this shattered the peaceful lifestyle they had come to know.

(Side note: The language during and before NightMare Moon's time is different from today (no derp) Therefore I took the liberty of making it so it could actually be read.

Disclaimer:All things pony related in this belong to Hasbro, I do not own Celestia, Luna or many other characters :P ALSO: The alfalfa scene in "Playing in the Rain" was made by egophiliac on deviantart, only I edited it a bit with dialogue differences but basically the same scene :P I will remove it if it the original artist requests so

Olde Canterlot- Ye Olde Canterlot

How to fly scene- Just keep flapping

Sunsrise alone- Sunset

Chapters (24)
Comments ( 22 )

2772012
Yeah... Well for now at least :P I have no clue seeing as I have three chapters... :facehoof: Ima gonna go change that now XD

2772028 Slice-of-life/comedy is much less :pinkiecrazy:

2772042
Yes indeedy XD :pinkiehappy: I gosh I suck at tags :twilightblush:

OH GOSH WHAT TAGS DO I USE? IT JUST GOT REALLY SERIOUS N' CHIZ!!! :raritydespair: :facehoof:

Edit: Ok, never mind. For now it's Random :D :D :D :D :facehoof:

... I went back and didn't save... Not on purpose...
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GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR :flutterrage: :twilightangry2:

Oh golly I left a cliffhanger... >:{D Now I must go an stroke my imaginary beard as I write the next chapter

Comment posted by Blue Turtle deleted Sep 14th, 2013
Comment posted by Blue Turtle deleted Sep 14th, 2013

Sorry for the shortness of this chapter... I would have though with so much going on I would have written more but apparently not :facehoof:

Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.

2833070
Well I have not mostly because I still have to work on it a bit, but thanks for the idea! :twilightsmile:

I've been havinga major-writer's blocks as of now so this chapter may take a while :pinkiegasp: :facehoof:

Comment posted by Blue Turtle deleted Sep 14th, 2013

So... much writing block.....

Comment posted by Blue Turtle deleted Jul 11th, 2013
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Comment posted by Blue Turtle deleted Oct 3rd, 2013

Argh I'm going to start revising all the dialogue so it looks less awkward.

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