The fate of Equestria is once again threatened when thieves from another dimension somehow manage to steal the Elements of Harmony. Now, with the kingdom's strongest defense missing and Equestria open to attack from anything and everything, Twilight and her friends set out to bring the Elements back before the kingdom falls and they have nothing to return to. It sounds easy enough, but the enemies that they will face will be harder than any other foe they have faced before- themselves!
Chapters (2)
Oh, love it so far. I am glad you are including all the ponies.
Good job on your first chapter, but I have one small complaint that occasionally pops up in HIE and POE stories. Humans are not completely devoid of harmony, If we where inharmonious as a social species we would have gone extinct long ago. Perhaps Tia is confusing magic with harmony?
2745497 mhmmm. yeah. because she's never actually been to this other world and only heard of it, she perceives it to be completely different than theirs. because our world doesn't work like Equestria, she believes there is no harmony, even thought there is. She just doesnt know that. at least not yet.
don't tell me this is a ponies=good, humans=eeeevvviiillll story. I'm so sick of those.
2748860 nah, you'll see
Sweet
You do know that a lack of friendship means they can't exactly use the elements of Harmony. Since the Human world is basically devoid of any magic and the human counterparts are completely lacking in the friendly matter, as proven in Return to Harmony, if they are not the bearers and they lack the element they represent, the elements are without use.
But then it's another writer's story so I'll see for one more chapter and gauge if I'll be watching this story.
2742455 your profile pic is like this story.
TheNewYorkBrony: inspired by equestria girls? totally okay if it is.
that part was scray!
:punching, 
:crying, 
almost killing 
, 
yelling? whats goin on here!?
MOOOOORRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Interesting...
I'll track it.
Updates? Soon?
pweese
5041171 I agree. Please update soon.
Will this ever be updated? This concept is pretty cool actually