Yukigo Kurosaki
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I thought it was going to be a clopfic between Pinkie and her cousin. I didn't read the warning. I was quite surprised.
Won't let me rate, but here's my reaction:
I found this to be a very cute story with a hawt ending :3
There's something bugging me about the sex scene though...hmm I'm not sure, but it just feels like it's missing something. It was good, but...I don't know, I just can't pin it down :/
I was a bit surprised that Brandon never experimented with his own toys. Months of not seeing anypony and he's got a whole building of these things and he doesn't get the least bit carious o.O. Well, okay then.
Have a good one.
this was actully really good! :D
222886 And that is why you read warnings. xD Though, rereading the description, I certainly can see how one would think that. Pinkie Pie semi-incest, go!
222952 It might well be... I got that slight impression myself to while writing it. A lot of writers can feel when something's going wrong in their story, and I had that impression all last night. Couldn't really figure it out though. Will be glad to revise this piece as I see fit though.
And yeah, I can't believe I didn't consider that massive plot hole. Brandon certainly could have played with his own toys. Maybe he was just scared though, of someone finding out? Still, I'll think about ways to possibly explain it.
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Too short on the actual scene, maybe?
I want more of those stallion to stallion action ;P
Whew, that cover art is cutting it close
it was a nice read
I have this bad tendency to read things in an overly exaggerated southern hillbilly kind of way. So when I read "You've got a boner," it threw me off because it just.. the voice just kinda came out of no where like that.