After a long day of working clubs Vinyl is helped home by a mysterious pony but is she ready for the commitment and challenges that will follow? Vinyl has spent the last 3 months spending all her money on drinks. She's lost and confused but one day she stumbles across a stallion who might just be her knight and shining armor who arrived to guide her out of the darkness. But is she ready to take that step and to trust him with herself?
(Trust me the story is a lot better than this description so just read it and give it a shot I hope you guys enjoy)
Chapters (3)
Not bad, tracked.
To be honest guys I didn't even mean to publish this chapter so unfinished but now that it's out I think I'll just leave it that way.
Also I want to thank the guys tracking this, this is my first story and i was hoping to get 5 maybe 10 trackers over the course of this thing and overnight i'm already at 20 and counting
thanks guys hopefully I'll get another chapter up by the end of the week for you guys so stay tuned
I think this is pretty decent, though you could have elaborated on some of the character's emotions a little bit more. Also, there were a few grammatical errors, mostly with speaking parts. I felt like I needed to point that out, my apologies.
Keep writing, this is pretty good.
224825 Thanks
like I said earlier i kind might of accidentally pre-released the chapter.
Plus i need to find a good proof reader for the next chapter. Hopefully the next chapter will fix everything that was wrong with this chapter and help convey the story and emotion better.
Also once I get a good proof reader or two I assume I'll have all the grammatical kinks worked out.
Thanks for the comment though it makes me happy
here have some random emoticons for no particular reason
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Free emoticons!? These are so hard to come by! thanks!
And hey, if you'd like, I can pre-read for you. I'm currently working on the fimfiction contest (and I have a few people waiting patiently on my que because of it
) but I'd be more than happy to take a look when the chapter is ready :D
i think u did a really good jod so far keep up the good work
Beep.
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235852 bleep.
To all trackers, the next chapter is coming. I have already sent it to an editor so expect it by tuesday.
yay
Second chapter is up. Sorry it wasn't out earlier I got all caught up in the (fake
) animator Q&A stuff on ponychan. Sorry that that took precedence over you guys even more. 
u all
Call me a sucker for Vinyl Scratch fics
Tracked!
There's love in the air
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im ok with this so far
not to spoil anything for you guys but what I can say is if you stick around for the next chapter it might be worth your time...
(and no that does not mean clopfic
)
242760 damn.. I wanted one.
joking oc
243978 I laughed so hard I almost knocked my laptop off my desk. Just thinking of our collaborative work towards the like
lol
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Very d'awww and a hetero Vinyl Scratch pairing now that's rare. Not ultra rare like Trixie, but still refreshing from the usual shipping pairs.
244592 Yes I found that, in general Vinyl scratch is a lesbian slut and I felt like there should be a story where she has a deeper character than just a care free DJ my only fear is that I drift too far from her original and it loses the touch of Vinyl that I still want to be there.
K, It's unique and interesting. Now where does it go next? :3
253017 It's being edited now sunday will see (hopefully) the most jaw dropping and moving chapter yet.
Dick move, chance! Dick move!
262386 chuck norris aproves your coment
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Chance, get your head out of your ass and take care of your foal you weak excuse for a stallion!
Feels a Biiiit... rushed, I guess is the word.
Feels like (to me) something like this should have more build-up to it, and should be a bit longer than that. The sudden transition from Vinyl being distraught to her being A-Okay feels a bit weird too. I'm still likin the story, just something to keep in mind for the future.
Why Chance why? At least me left a house and some bits I suppose.
262807 Ya there is a story behind why some of my work feels rushed but I won't bore you with it. Also there is a lot more to come which is why so much happened early on.
262825Its cool, like I said, just try to keep it in mind for future stuff.
well fuck that was short lived
Hay everyone, I just wanted to let you all know that the chapter's won't be up as fast for this story because I am now also taking up work on Sweetie Belle's Secret.
THIS DOES NOT MEAN THAT I WILL NOT UPDATE! I hope you guys continue to enjoy the tale of hetero Vinyl and check out my new story. Thanks guys I 
you all
At least he left her some bits and a house I guess.
Haha I can't believe people are actually reading this garbage
I think this is pretty bad but... If you guys like it I'll stick with it
Expect a new chapter soon, and I wouldn't hate too much on Chance, not just yet. Also, I'm sorry guys,
I promise the next one will be here soon.
New chapter Y U No come out yet?
411243 Sorry, I'm working on getting new chapters for this, and Sweetie Belle's Secret, there has been numerous shit that is slowing me down with the Marines being ass holes and giving me problems. Fear not it will be posted within two weeks.
1: Please get an editor. The grammar was great, but the sentence structure needed work.
2: Very good idea.
3: You should probably write longer chapters, this one took me barely 1 second to scroll through.
Love the idea, track+1-up+fave.