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Hi, guys! I'm Brittany, an aspiring author. I can't wait to write some awesome stuff for all of you, and I hope you enjoy what I put out there!

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After her disastrous trip to Ponyville, Trixie's career was ruined. But what of her life before that? Discover the elements of her past in this gripping tale of love, friendship, and loss, casting Equestria's most controversial showmare in a new light for the first time. This is the story of how a little filly grew up to be The Great and Powerful Trixie.

Random Note:
Throughout this story are many OC ponies. However, several of them aren't as "original" as you might think. There are quite a few that were actual MLP toys I had growing up that I decided to throw in here. For some, I stayed true to the original name and design, while for others, I kept everything but the cutie-mark, and for others still I merely used the pony's design/color scheme and created everything else myself. Once this story is finished, I'll add pictures of all these ponies. If you can point out any of these ponies before I do this, you will receive one million internets. And a cookie. That is all.


ATTENTION:
The story is currently being rewritten. I sent it in to EqD, they declined and gave me feedback, so now I'm going and doing what they suggested. I REALLY want this in EqD, so I'm doing everything I can to make it happen. I hope you enjoy the revised version when it's finished. Thank you for your patience.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 36 )

Not sure what to think of this story, but I want to see where it goes. Tracking for now.

Ohhhhh. Trixie's life before! I haven't seen this done yet.

Trixie has had a really hard life. :fluttercry: And she's only five!

237157 :rainbowlaugh: You just made me lol.

Oh Gawd moar:pinkiegasp:
Nice I have tracked this!
And now we wait...:trixieshiftleft:

Damn her for hurting Trixie!! :flutterrage:
Great chapter I shall now pateintly wait for more.:twilightsmile:

Yay! Chapter 5 is DONE!
Okay, I just wanted to let you all know that I will begin editing and re-writing some of the first few chapters. There are some things I wanna add, things I wanna take out, stuff like that. And, the main reason being, I submitted this to EqD not too long ago, and they told me a few things to work on, so I want to go back and apply all that good stuff. So, yeah! I hope you enjoy the re-written chapters when I put them out. Till then, here's chapter 5!

:pinkiehappy:

Haha, I'm loving this story so far. Keep it up!

And I hope the "few things to work on" included a few grammar/spelling errors. :P
/sarcasm

290405 ...Wait, what? Spelling errors? Where? :rainbowderp:

290959 Haha, I was partly joking... But if you really want to know...

"Your welcome, Lieutennant Sarcasm." "You're welcome", not "your welcome". Also, "lieutenant" is misspelled.
"For all we know, neither story could true." Needs "be" between "could" and "true".
"My guess would be that that's part of that brute's hoarde," "hoard" would be more correct, I believe.

... That's all I could find in my half asleep state. xD
Sorry if I sounded like a dick there, haha.

But again, I'm loving this. These Trixie stories are fairly common, but this stands out in particular! :)

291367 Dang! Thanks for pointing those out to me!
Wow, really?! Thanks! I'm glad to hear you like it so much! And trust me, this story will only continue to grow more and more different from other Trixie stories. :pinkiehappy:

Feedback, eh? Found some. :P
(spelling/grammar stuff)

"Coal grimaced. "Sorry," he appologized," "Apologized" is misspelled.
"There's timber wolves, ursa majors, the odd cockatrice," Capitalize "Ursa Major".

;D
(i sound like a dick)
- EmuZSNES

303994 :trixieshiftleft: Dang it. . . :facehoof:

Actually, I was regarding feedback plotwise, but pointing out spelling mistakes is definitely appreciated. Like, misspelling drives me crazy. Don't worry, you don't sound like a dick at all. Then again, I really don't know what a dick sounds like. I didn't even know dicks made sounds. Learn something new every day, huh?

:pinkiehappy:

304047 Haha, as a former newsletter editor, I am a bit used to noticing those awkward spelling mistakes... as for plotwise things... I'm not good at that stuff. :facehoof:

As for what a dick sounds like...
I think it's better for the world not to know. x]

304066 Well, I definitely appreciate pointing out my bonehead mistakes. And you're probably right. . . . Now you've got me wondering, though. What would a dick sound like? :twilightoops: You know what? Just to keep my mind clean, I'm going to imagine that dinging noise that happens in cartoons when a guy gets an implied boner. XP

304147 :rainbowlaugh: Oh wow. . . glad I never have to worry about that. . . That seems pretty creepy though.

Good luck getting into EqD! I hope you do well, and I'm pretty sure you could. I like shipping just fine, but the stories that delve into the characters of background or shallow characters are really interesting. You have done wonderfully!

308078 Wow, thank you! :pinkiehappy: I hope you continue to feel that way!

Great story, I'm digging this Coal character.:twilightsheepish:

309970 Well, if that's the case, then you're in luck, because you'll be seeing him just about throughout the rest of the story. :twilightsmile:

And I'm glad to hear you like him! He's definitely one of my favorite (if not my favorite) OC's that appear in this story (my other faves are yet to come). It's funny though, because his original role in the plot was a lot different than it is now. In the original version, I was going to have Trixie find his egg abandoned in the cave and hatch him using magic and have him go on to be Trixie's "Spike", per se. Then I got the idea for what his role is now, fell in love with it instantly, scrapped everything I had previously come up with and practically reworked the entire story around him. Like, I'm not even kidding. :derpytongue2:

So yeah. Blah. I'm glad you like him! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Trixie having a spike? I never thought of that:pinkiegasp:
Well awesome story I shall wait for more.:rainbowwild:

317391
See? The things us writers come up with. Crazy, huh? :derpytongue2:
Anyways, I'm glad to see you're like the story thus far!

So even Vanity betrays her.
TT^TT

Anyway, just want to say, I am absolutely loving this so far, and I don't regret tracking one bit. :D

426754
Thanks!:pinkiehappy:
But never fear! Coal's still on her side. . . at least, for the time being :pinkiehappy:
. . .
teehee

nice chapter :pinkiehappy:

471780
Thank you! I try my hardest! :pinkiehappy:

So her talant is looking good? lol:pinkiehappy:

Trixie rocks >:o

471832
:rainbowlaugh: If that's how you wanna put it, then yeah. Vanity is exceptionally good at, well, being vain.
Of course The Great and Powerful Trixie rocks. Duh. This is old news. The Great and Powerful Trixie rocks even more than Tom. :trixieshiftright:

471898 Heh, I see what you did thar.

Well excellent fic. Keep up the good work.:rainbowkiss:

472213
Yes, yes, I'm sure you did. :moustache:
I will try, my good friend, I will try. :raritywink:

That's messed Up :,(

This is A pretty Good fic In my Opinion. i Wasn't looking For trixie As a Filly, but I can't Complain when It delivered Such a Tale.
keeping The chapters Coming!

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