Twilight and Rainbow Dash have only a few days to bring natural order back to equestria, with time running out and pressure building up will they be able to reunite their friends? Or will they count the minutes remaining together.
Hey guys! First published fic here so let me know if I should continue this or not.
This has mild TwiDash and I have an idea for a prequel. If it does well and the mass demands a sequel then I shall provide one!
On hiatus as the plot I originally planned is buggy
Chapters (2)
*nervously twiddles thumbs*
Know what? Like almost every other story on here, there is potential lingering among these words here. Let's see where you're going to take this, Author. I'll track, and hold off on passing judgement until at least chapter three. For now though, I'll say capital job old bean!
Great man, keep it up.
Seems interesting; tracked.
Rating is down.
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Good plot, and btw, here's a funny story.
Yesterday, I published a story for valentine's day that has a picture like this, but with Rarity and Fluttershy.
The funny part is that it was based off a song from Linkin Park's album 'Minutes To Midnight'. I like the way you think, good sir. And I want to here more of this story.
Looks really good i'm definitely gonna track and give it a read later
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And I think I may have read that lol.
I chose this since I didn't want a picture of them 'together' but together at the same time... if that makes any sense.
And as far as Pinkie's little song goes, I am going to try and make her remember everything that made them so close throughout the story(hopefully without ruining it)
I should have a chapter up tonight or tommorrow, depends on if I finish college work fast enough.
The story itself will not be terribly long ( obviously they only have a few days left (or do they?)) and I think I may remove the Romance tag since there won't be any romancing,
New chapter, the story sohuld start chugging along nicely now, and the chapters will probably start being around 4k words or more each. Thank you for the comments and please I invite constructive criticism since this is my first published story.
I decided to keep the romance tag up since I will be delving into their psychology a bit more... but don't expect anything more than a nuzzle or a quick peck on the cheek
Also how did I do with Celstia's little game?
Ooo I like where this story is going, tracked and waiting for more!
Also not bad for mild trollestia heh
Forgot to mention your doing character development!
hmm. Could use some grammar work and there were some parts where I had trouble following the conversation.
But the premise is solid, facing the end of the world.
I'll keep and eye on this one.
Celestia is mean but so funny xD poor twilight :P
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I was trying to convey Celestia as a little troll but to keep their mood from turning all gloom and doom, that way the story is not completely depressing hah.
And I am glad I am doing ok with character development, I know some people may think that they are a little OOC but remember this is thirteen years later and personalities change. But I am trying to keep their general personality to match that of the show.
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This will probably be the last chapter where the flashbacks happen, it just suited the mood better when I wrote it.
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I had an ending in my head but I may... change it
... PInkie Pie having CHILDREN? Oh hell. Woona help Equestria in its time of need, else they won't survive long enough to be destroyed by their dieing planet! Can you imagine the kind of chaos her children would cause? Even Trollestia would quiver in terror at their overwhelming might!
We're talking
TIMES TWO, PEOPLE.
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What Have I created...
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... WHAT HAS SCIENCE DOOOOOONE?!
is this story going to continue?
Soooo.... I don't know if you guys are still around but I think now that I'm back on my feet with steady time that I may actually finish this story... Although it has been a LONG time and much has changed (as far as story-line) so I think I will modify the first two chapters and touch them up a little (sorry discord is still on stone, I 'd have to rewrite everything that way). I'll let you guys know later this weekend!!