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DarkPhoenix


Eh, there's not much to say about me.

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Fancy Pants had a perfect life: a burgeoning business, a lovely marefriend, and even a few ponies he could call a friend. All that changed the day he met Rarity. That day, his life started to crumble as his love for Rarity grew.

But when Rarity becomes unavailable, what will he do? To what lengths will Fancy Pants go in order to make Rarity his? And what part does Sweetie Belle play in all this?

Cover art done by the wonderful and talented jaybugjimmies over on dA. Go give her some love.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 27 )

You have gained my interest.
Please, moar! :flutterrage:

I am interested to see where this goes, and I wonder if maybe Fancy Pants has lost it. I guess we shall see.

Mr. Pants has gone off the deep end. This will not end well!

Hide yo kids! :unsuresweetie:

I very much enjoy your selection of characters... I feel like the tags don't do this story justice however. It's like a sort of Slice of Life that has taken a turn for the not so normal... It is very good all the same.

Read Later! :raritystarry:

I love it keep it up I can't wait lil dark

I'm almost getting a "Littlefinger" vibe off of Fancy Pants, almost because at least up until the final stages of Storm of Swords Littlefinger was subtle about it...

This story has a unique approach to characters I really like.
It is also very well written if I do say so myself.

wow love it

Fancy in this story seems a lot like Lord Petyr Baelish from Game of Thrones manipulating others to get what he wants.

I love fancy pants/rarity and it needs more love.:heart:

Fancy pants is kinda dancing the line between father wannabe and cradle robber here with the sniffing thing. I mean I know there animals but still.Maybe I'm reading more into that then I need to. I like how you detailed how magic is practiced.Always nice to see that.

Dark, what have you done? I'll be back...

Every time you use the title in a sentence...it's almost the effect of a pun...I'm so proud of you. :pinkiesad2: Loving the diction.

I feel like a horrible person for finding that scene with Fancy and Sweetie to be cute. I just know you're going to turn it into something far worse.

And now we wait... *malicious finger bridge*

Updateupdateupdate for the love of Celestia!! Update!!!! *gets on knees, begging in despair* I love this fanfic so much!!! I haven't read something this interesting in so long!! It’s so wrong!! But I wanna keep reading!! I'm a monster for this, but I kind if want to see Fancy Pants succeed in his plan!! Just because his so darn clever!!!

confused.... I really like the story but the cover page it looks like sweetie belle is scared of fancy pats but in the story she really likes him :unsuresweetie: and also are you sill working on it just wondering..

4503008 I am still working on it. Real life has just kept me very busy lately, between the job and getting the book ready for publishing. There is a chapter in the works, though.

4507478 okie dokie lokie! :pinkiehappy:

Why are there so many down votes when the comments are pretty much all positive?

Ughhhh I know its twisted but I really REALLY want to see him get Sweetie! T.T His working so hard! The weirdo! He deserves a break!

Whatever the pony equivalent of the amber alert is I have a feeling they will be using it soon. Not many stories where Fancy Pants is the villain so that's an interesting twist.Rarity better keep a close eye on her sister.

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Probably not liking that FP is made a villain, trying to hurt SB.

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