im a runner an a artist.
AJ was just a normal 18 year old boy living in what used to be the free country of the United States of America which is now controlled by the government in every way possible. Then while he was out on a run he sees this strange girl and the moment they meet eachother makes him question if his life on Earth was a lie. A Rebellion on Earth and a Rebellion in Equestria what could possibly be worse.
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2723811 I made some changes and fixed some mistakes if you want to check it out sorry if you don't like it
Get a proofreader, stat! There are quite a lot of errors here.
Find an alternative to identifying a flashback with "Flashback" and "End of Flashback." This is prose, not a script. You might try putting that paragraph in italics, for starters.
2727962 thanks ill try and get a proof reader when I can get the chance. Also thanks for letting me know on the flashback
2727962 Ok I got it proofread, if you see anything else that needs fixed let me know. I hope you continue with the story