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Not bad I shall follow and see where this is going.
Oh and first story take this you may need it
2717585 Hey thanks! I'll try to live up to your expectations.
Nice. Great way to start a story.
I want to read more of this story.
(nods) this is getting good
Wow I am the first to leave a comment. a good start to the story and I do hope you rite more. I don't know why you have 15 dislike to the story. I for one like the start and can't wate to see where this will leed. keep up the good work.javascript:smilie('
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Thanks so much for your support. Don't worry I'm still writing and the next chapter will be out soon!
2723895 Thank you for the reply and keep up the good work. javascript:smilie('
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this shows alot of promise and is absolutely MILES ahead of most other fics I've read with this premise. my only criticisms are:
He seems fairly accepting of the fact that he is surrounded by essentially aliens on an entirely different world. I know if it were you or me we would both have a complete mental breakdown (Don't be too hard on yourself about this though ALOT of fics make this mistake) just something you might want to think about.
secondly PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE do not! power ship dash and the protagonist. Too often I see fics like this were their already confessing their love by the fourth chapter. I hope i'm wrong and your avoiding this but please just make the relationship seem realistic.
thirdly (and this is me just nitpicking) I can't imagine anyone risking their lives for a rabbit. but that's not that big of a deal.
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Thanks for the criticism! Some of the things you pointed out I've already noticed and facepalmed myself about. And don't worry, I'm probably going to make the romance a little more in depth than that. Anyway, thanks for reading and I hope you continue to!
2725820 Believe me this fic and in turn you as an author definitely shown promise and as long as the quality keeps up i will continue reading
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The next chapter's coming. I've been working on a one-shot clopfic so as so as I'm finished that I'll get right back to this.
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WOO HOO 
What in the hell is wrong with Twilight? Had she been taking lessons from Luna about how to talk in the olden days?
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Haha! You'll see...
The stories like this make my brakes a work that much better
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Awww thanks for the support!
More information about what the protagonist is thinking presently would help the reader feel more involved in the story, as would him asking for some more detailed explanations about the world he is now in.
That said I'll watch thins and hopefully see it turn in a funny, romantic love triangle haha!
What wrong with Twilight? is she letting her new position go to her head? That is not the way to make friends. is she taking lessons from blue blood? A good chapter and I can't wait for the next one. keep up the good work.
This is pretty good!
A few mistakes, but for the most part your grammar and such checks out.
I'm sure getting drunk and appearing in Equestria has been used before, and probably quite often, but I'm thinking that your execution (Or how you've written it) is good enough (in my opinion) to look past any pieces of un-originality.
I shall have to read the rest! I hope it doesn't steer away from what I've gotten so far.
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Yeah, I'm sure a lot of my ideas are pretty unoriginal,but hopefully I'll manage to squeeze a few fresh ones in as I continue to write. Thanks for the support though!
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I feel the same way. My story is stuffed full of un-originality, but I'm hoping that my new ones, and the quality of mah writing will hope to blow past it.
I will gladly support a writer like me!
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Small World, ain't it?
Really loving this story atm :D
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Thanks for reading and enjoying. The next chapter should be out soon!
interesting... i eagerly await more! ONWARDS!
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My guess is... changeling.
Produced by Donald P. Bellasario
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Dude! Didn't think anypony would get that reference! Nicely done.
are you still writing this it's been about 20 days
are you still writing this it's been about 20 days
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Had a bunch of stuff going on with college coming up. The next chapter should be up by either today or tomorrow.
Yep, sorry about the wait.
2895956yay thxs for the update
this is top! have a stache
I hope you make the homesickness a big part of this. To often I see hie fics where the human just kinda accepts it after one chapter.
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Thanks for the facial hair, much appreciated.
But wow, I'm surprised somepony enjoyed this chapter so much. Maybe, I'm over analyzing it or someting.
Anyway, thanks for the support!
So why is twilight speaking like that? Makes no sense.
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Yeah, it'll be explained one way or another.
Patience, friend. Thanks for reading
Oh thank celestia!!! After enduring several aweful abominations that are trying to past themselfs of as fics I have found a well writen and well paced fic with an interesting protagonist. Keep up the awesome work mate.
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Thanks for the compliment and support!
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I am looking forwRd to more
Oh the awkwardness is high in this one
It is funny how Rainbow Dash is trying to remain cool in this awkwardness. This Chapter was entertaining and I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
I never can get enough Rainbow Dash Fics
Good job sir!
you get a Like, Fav and Follw from me
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Thank you! Obviously you can see I love Rainbow fics as well so I hope you'll enjoy my series.
very nice!
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Thank you!
Nice fall there!
NOW KISS lol