Taking a vacation in a nice relaxing and peaceful country? That's good.
Taking a vacation and being blamed for the the theft of some very important jewelry? That's bad.
Taking a vacation and becoming public enemy number one? That's really bad.
Taking a vacation and being hunted by adorable pegasi, unicorns, and ponies? That's... different.
A mage decides to take a respite in what he assumes to be the peaceful and safe land of Equestria. Unfortunately he's accused of stealing the "Elements of Harmony", a powerful set of magical regalia, and goes on the run from the law. Now stuck in a land of magical ponies, cut off from his only way home, and now the most wanted creature in Equestria, does he have any hope of proving his innocence and going home?
Maybe, but let's laugh at him as he gets beat up by cute equines!
lol This character might as well be Lily.
Can anyone find that recent youtube video of her? My search isnt working.
Can someone make one with Vaas? Please? Also I like this one!
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What? Make one with what?
A mage in Equestria? Interesting.
Hohoho. . . I did indeed enjoy this, even though I'm still waiting for Cheating Death Paht 2.
Still!
This has some potential, methinks. . . .
Alas, those poor cabbages will never know a tasty salad...
I wonder what will happen when he sees the mane 6? probably get throne thro a wall and dive bombed by dash.
Edited: Damn! Thanks bronies for getting this featured the same day it was published! I already know Wil is going to be ecstatic.
3982588 As one of the editors of this glorious tale of misunderstandings and hilarity, I cannot tell you much. Save for one thing:
Ya'll be in for one wild ride!
3982611 I am pretty shear that is an under statement of what is to come later in this story.
"And loitering"
Okay, it's taken some time for me to get on the bandwagon, but I guess I'll give this a go.
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Bandwagon?
3982785 Oh. Uh...Just the whole "human goes to Equestria and becomes public enemy number one" thing. It's been happening a whole bunch lately.
But hey, you have good cover art. So I'm going to read it.
Dat getaway scene...
Beginning to think the hie subgenre is evolving. First it was porn. It never really got past that, but some did. Then it was porn and wish-fulfillment. Now it seems to be epic tales of hyper-powered humans engaging Equestria in any number of ways. Flight, Fight, or simply wreck everything in unbridled demonstrations of borderline-godlike powers. Gotta say, I prefer the last. Still, magic is always fun. I'll join this one.
3982805 I wouldn't count this one in with those. All of the League's stories involve normal people becoming some sort of fantasy villain when they get there, but this one doesn't change the character in the slightest. That is why I love it so...
3983125 That's fair enough. Sorry, I just sort of assumed based on the title.
3983131 Oh don't worry about it...
Cassie...
hue hue hue...
3983134 Dammit Twig. I literally just noticed your username.
3983136 I didn't notice till it said SWIFT ETHAN HAS REPLIED TO YOUR COMMENT!
BUTT ANYWHORE! I really do love this story. I can not wait to see where it goes... in the meantime, I'm going to stalk your other stories... This Cheating Death one seems interesting.
I faved this and upvoted before i even read it. Why? Because the author wrote the cheating death fics, i need say no more.
Interesting
Let's see where this goes...
Would ponies have public indecency as a crime?
Still, this sounds like a fun silly adventure so I will be keeping an eye on it.
Your alliteration is marvelous.
Happy 100th!
This sounds way too epic for me to ignore.
Great job on your first part. Now a question for you. How often will you be planning on updating?
Don't have time right now, will read later.
Just wait until he meets Twi. Teleporting is practically her specialty.
Lol!
LOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!!!NOT MY CABBAGES!
3984360 I unfortunately overshot, instead colliding into some vendor’s stall that was completely full of cabbages.
That wouldn't happen to be a reference to Man of War would it?
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He should have screamed back:
Don't you mean or
I see what you did there.
3984524 It's a reference to Avatar, The Last Airbender.
MY CABBAGES!
Liking the story so far, can't wait until next chapter is released. You have a new fave
oh this is good
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The guy just can't get a break, no even in The Legend of Korra, it seems.
"Fus Ro Dah Bitches"
I love that
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Why do I have the suspicion meeting Twilight may not be a good idea? after all, Celestia should have already warned her via Spike about the robbery and the bipedal mage.
write moar soon please...
I must admit I would very much want to see more of this
3984524 I was thinking more along the lines of Avatar: The Last Airbender.
3984747 Darn! Beat me to it! Oh well.
My sides...... They ache
Mage Managing Mistaken Misconduct? bet you can't say that fve times really fast Mage Managing Mistaken Misconduct...
Maze Magganing Mistaken Mscnduct
Ah, never mind.
Is Billy Witchdoctor .com going to need to pay this story a visit as well?
OH GOD WRITE THIS RIGHT NOW.
This looks almost exactly like the HiE I'm writing...