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It's been a few months since a failed attempt at making a new spaghetti sauce turned out to have a secondary effect. The addicts called it Pon-E, most likely because users were transformed into technicolor ponies for 12 glorious hours at a time. Because of the narcotic behavior of the substance, however, Pon-E is of dubious legality. This is a story of what happens when the law tries to get between a pony and his fix.

[pov warning: 2nd person]

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 50 )

This looks like a legit idea
do not understand the downvotes yet
take an upvote

Lol
Spaghetti
I see what you did there

See now, I like this fic
this is a nice fic
please keep writing this fic

Because sometimes i just sit on my balls and go
"OH YEAH! THIS PAIN! LETS ME KNOW THINGS ARE FUCKING RIGHT!"

ok
post read
that was fucking awesome
I like this story
it's sexy
it's enticing
it's got promise
it's well written
keep writing it
hell yeah

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I'm guessing that the hate is coming from the sad human as protagonist? This is actually a better read than some of the fics on the damn featured list. Good on ya mate.

A yellow star you say? Why yes, I will give this story a favorite.

Interesting. I'll keep an eye on this.

Oh god I got hard fast

:moustache:/10

This is good. I will watch for more.:pinkiehappy: Also ponies make you :applejackconfused:.

I'm not usually a friend of 2nd-person-perspective, but I'll make an exception for this story. :twilightsmile:
edit:
Also a link to Pon-E would have been nice.

I have a nagging feeling I've read this before sometime in the past, though at the same time, a bit different.:rainbowhuh:

Spaghetti made a drug.

Fuck it. Seems legit.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Welp. This isn't going to end well.

I look forward to the next chapter.

~Skeeter The Lurker

2750955

Another piece of wisdom eternal from Skeeter The Lurker.

2751040

Hey, my sisters once turned some sauce green. Like I said, seems legit.

~Skeeter The Lurker

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That's a good point, I'll add one in. Also, if you like this and the original Pon-E story, I suggest you read emms's other Pon-E story: Pon-E Blackouts. That dude is a silly pony. Many thanks to him for letting me expand upon his canon. ^_^

This is an interesting concept. I can't wait to see MOAR

Awesome, I really want to see where this goes.

Spaghetti...........HA!!!

The picture is so-D'aaaaaawwww!!

This fic amazing! More chapters please!

:yay:MOAR!Um....if that's ok with you:twilightsmile: Keep up the good work, I will be watching from the shadows:rainbowdetermined2:

I'm not even surprised that Stargaze is trans*, he has such a male "voice" that I thought the narrator was a cis dude to begin with. As for Snips, I found her to be strangely effeminate and now we know why. Awesome fic! :pinkiehappy:

2751363 I didn't even know there were that many Pon-E stories already. I only knew about the original one. Glad I found this one and thanks for linking ro the third!
Also, a female-to-male story? Great, don't see them often at all here!

2922122 Something tells me its not suppose to be cute

2944184 probably not but I think it's cute anyway

What is a dog-eared window?

You want to kiss that girl--that, that /mare/--and you want it to be right. You want it to be as right as a plate of spaghetti in the evening.

Somebody is used to the IRC. You'll want to italicize that word, not just put forward slash marks in front of it.

Um, I think this story is missing some content warning tags. :twilightoops:

She's gone. They took her away.

:fluttershysad::fluttercry::raritydespair: WHY!?!?!:raritycry:WHY DID THEY TAKE HER AWAY!?!?!
Keep up the good work, I will be watching from the shadows:rainbowdetermined2:

>spaghetti
topkek

As this story is so far beyond the "norm" (whatever that even means in this fandom) I've a lot of leeway to give for stylistic and other choices. To borrow a phrase "You had my curiosity, but now you have my attention." I ask only for a satisfying ending, however you choose to get there. :eeyup:

She's gone. They took her away.

They're coming to take me away, ha-ha! They're coming to take me away, ho-ho! He-he, ha-ha, to the funny farm! Where life is beautiful all the time, and I'll be happy to see those nice young men in their clean white coats! :pinkiecrazy:

The spaghetti hits the fan next chapter

Hold on. The POV character is female? Should've been in the description. Even if the first chapter already mentioned the 'parts', those could also be available in very flabby fat men (eww).

Nice short TF sequence.

I actually enjoyed this. Shame the cliffhanger is forever.

Noooo, how can it end here?! On such a downer cliffhanger? They were gonna be happy together! :raritycry:

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