Vanilla Beam has lived with the Mane 6 since being shrunk. But one day, Twilight Sparkle shrinks herself and ends up getting stuck. She and Vanilla are now at the mercy of all the "giants" of Equestria.
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That was awful, the robotic Cerberus would never team up with a garlic lobster in real life.
Jeez, at least make your shitty OC story believable.
Pretty cute so far!
Kind of a strange OC, but I like the story. You should continue it.
3045613
i smell dark coming on.....
Good so far
3045613 Lol,that doesn't even appear in the fic.
PLZ CONTINUE IT!!!!!1!!!
That should be "lose" instead of "loose". Also, you need to use [] with the B in the middle to make the text bold instead of <>. That way, the results will be more like this:
I'm loving this so much!
3140092 Thank you, never used the bold before
The grammar's gotten way better, I've noticed! I really like how you've started using bolding, rather than all-caps.
This story seems to have potential. Good luck with the next chapters! :)
3180274 Thanks Twi
Aaahh! Close call!!
Your grammar's gotten quite good! One or two typos, but really solid otherwise!
Wonder what they'll do now?
I found two typos you may want to edit.
That should be "kinda".
And that should be "someone's". Nice chapter though.
Excellent new chapter I do hope we get a flashback on how vanilla and Twilight became such close friends
where's part 4?
chapter 4?
Good to see you got a DA page up! I hear it goes a long way toward helping an artist keep up thier practice.
Basically, what I've heard works well is setting aside at least one hour each day to work on your art (or your writing). It's a lot like working out a muscle -- you need to keep in the habit, consistently.
3502992 Thx for the tip
aslong as we get a new chapter every month or 2 i wont complain
3504831 Thx sis
Dun dun duuuuhhhh!
another solid entry
but thats to be expected 
Oh, so after this will come that situtation from your newest picture? :D
4043951 Thanks sis
heck yeah!
I'm guessing the next chapter will have something along the lines of "CUTTIE MARK CRUSADERS BUG SQUISHERS!!"
Good chapter!
That cover art...
4958395 Indeed
I made it a LONG time ago
I found some things you may want to edit.
That should be "friend's".
That should be "conversing".
I would recommend getting rid of one of the "I'm sure" parts, otherwise it seems kinda redundant. Also, remember to start a new paragraph when you switch which character is talking.
5359962 Thanks for the info
Tee hee hee hee!
Shocking titan-sized ponies always gets great results
5472013 Yes they do ^_^
Nice chapter, but there's some things you may want to edit.
That should be "now".
That should be "fillies'".
Correct me if I'm wrong, but I could have sworn that an earlier chapter said Twilight was an alicorn. Also, there's something you may want to note based on this sentence.
In actuality, being that small would make it much less likely that they would die from falling because of how quickly they would reach terminal velocity.
Aaaahhhh!!
5577984 What's with all the yelling?
5578288
(It was a freaky cliffhanger)
5579030 Ah, yes it is
This story is really amazing it kinda reminds me of legend of Zelda the minish cap
5584204 Really? In what parts?
5584552 When I read when Twilight and vanilla were tiny along with the CMC I said to myself: Whoa! man this story reminds me of the time I played the minish cap back a couple years ago: but truth be told every single part of it.
My reaction: images.khinsider.com/The%20World%20Ends%20With%20You/Artwork/Mugshots/Neku02.png
5584647 Heh, well, glad to bring up some nostalgia