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Ever since young Pipsqueak met Princess Luna on his first Nightmare Night, he has always thought that she was his favorite Princess ever. Unfortunately, he is just a little village boy, and Luna is the Princess of the night. So seeing each other is near impossible. Pip seeks the help of his friend, Sweetie Belle, to see if she can teleport him to Luna. She tries her best, and successfully transports him to the Canterlot Castle, but with one slight hiccup. Pip was shrunk in the process, and is now at the mercy of all of the princesses, even Cadance and Twilight. But will he be able to see his main Princess, Luna, or will she end him with one step?

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Aww..this is going to be a cute and sweet story I think. Pip, don't worry, Luna is kind to all of her subjects, and she will definitely be honored and touched by your kind gesture. :pinkiehappy:

Aww..darn. No cutie mark yet. :unsuresweetie: Don't worry Sweetie you will get one in time. Also, time for Pip's biggest journey ever. :pinkiehappy:

Well, at least the shaking of Twilight's stomping caused Pip to get free. Oh, I can't wait to see who will find him first if he is found. :twilightblush:

I think you may want to replace "kanuing" with "canoeing"

Hmm.. I wonder who he landed on. :moustache:

Honey I Shrunk The Kids anyone?

Please Luna look down! :twilightoops: Please don't let poor little Pip be eaten.:fluttershysad:

huh...a hearts and hooves day card to luna, weird.

So sweet this chapter is, especially with how Luna comforted Pip after almost eating him, and thanking him for the love he shown her on Hearts and Hooves Day. I hope Celestia will be as understanding as Luna with Pip being in Canterlot Castle. :fluttershysad:

Dawww...

Not quite sure how big Pip is, at this point. It sounds like he's about the size of grain of rice? You should put in a line at some point that describes how small he is.

Very cute so far!

Wait a minute. Surely even a colt of Pipsqueak's age could distinguish between Rarity and Twilight.:applejackconfused:

Luna couldn't hear what he said, but she could hear him

:ajbemused: That makes less sense than Pinkie Pie.

2771611 :ajbemused: I'd appriciate less nip picking. She could hear him squeaking, but not hearing what words he was saying. I really don't mean to be rude, but THINK!!! :flutterrage:

D'aaaawwwwwwww.:twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

So, when is he going to get back to regular size?

I kind of wish he won't turn to normal size, because this is so cute with him being small with a giant sized and loving Princess Luna. :rainbowkiss:

Aww...now this was a very cute and sweet chapter. Luna pretending to be a giantess along with Cadence playing with tiny Pip. :pinkiehappy:

It's upsetting.

I really, really like this story and I'm enjoying the premise and plot, which is why I faved it. However, I can't get past the fact that the chapters are too short, the timing is way too quick, the grammatical and spelling errors, the constant capslock on speech... the list goes on.

But, I'll keep reading.

2844259 I'm sorry :fluttershbad: I'm just not a good writer. And I use the capslock to show how loud they sound to Pip. But I guess that's wrong too. I'm sorry :fluttershysad:

2848282 Gosh it's like talking to Fluttershy. :pinkiehappy:

And don't beat yourself up over it. The chapters have gotten a lot better since you first started.

It was sad for Pip to say goodbye to Luna, but they always have the night. Oh, I can't wait to see what Twilight has for fun in store for Pip. :twilightblush:

Aww..another cute and fun chapter. I wonder how Rarity would react if she saw tiny Pip. :pinkiehappy:

2734924........Pipsqueak is about to learn a very, hard lesson.....don't mess with nature, and wait till next nightmare night

2734942 if I saw a spider the size of a car I would just commit suicide or something.......I hate spiders a lot!

2747226....*munch*
Luna: why does this grass taste like pennies?

2771611 not nescarily <(spell this correctly) I listen to my mother all the time and I never understand what she said....but I still heard her noise!

2757674 this story could've gotten really clopy if it went somewhere else.

I hope You'll continue at this, i LOVE it!

4017699 I will, and hopefully once I get inspiration. Focusing more on the "Twilight/Vanilla Adventures" for now

This is actually one of your best stories, others are not so good as this one.
I got only one question... Why in the world Twi won't turn Pip back immediately, but decided to "play" with him? This makes no sense.

He would never be able to get there. But wait.... his friend Sweetie Belle is a unicorn. And not only that, but her sister is one of Princess Celestia's best students.

Um... Rarity is not one of Celestia's students, and Sweetie Belle is not related to Twilight. How does the statement above make sense?

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...................... wow, how did I miss that? XD Thank you for pointing that out

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