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Broken Logic


You know what? It's better you don't know.

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Ship Fluttershy with her shadow...

Fluttershy has just received a bouquet of flowers from none other than her shadow. Or so she thinks. Twilight Sparkle, always the skeptical pony, heads out to investigate and eventually all her friends get involved with miscellaneous schemes of finding who the mysterious sender is. And things were already busy enough with Nightmare Night only a few nights away.

AUTHOR'S NOTE: Don't expect updates, seriously. At the rate I'm going (which is a chapter a year...), this story will be done after FIM ceases to be a thing (hopefully a looong time away).

For your information, this whole idea sprung on that Dragonshy scene in which Fluttershy hits dangerous peaks of adorability. Just so you know.

Currently still being made, just really want some feedback since I'm new at this. Constructive, deconstructive or just instructive critisism appreciated. Of course, deconstructive critisism might hurt my feelings, but don't let that stop you.

Edit:So after months [And I mean MONTHS] of story edits and overhauls, I might actually finally get to the next chapter. In the next few months... Wish me luck. And I love you, PonyChan Training Grounds!!! Despite you making me work so hard D:
Edit 2: 28/01/2013: I"m working on it, okay?
Edit 3: 16/01/2014: Food has run out. We've taken to feeding ourselves sweaty socks. We pretend we're koalas, but it doesn't seem to help. Oh, and new chapter, finally.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 12 )

Tracking because I need to get back to my own story but this has caught my intrest by the title alone, that is very promising! :pinkiehappy:

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Thanks for giving it a go. Its a bit long, but I hope you like it.

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ITs perfect I love everthing about it!
Ok maybe a few grammar errors but I got no right to judge I think its perfect!
COnsider your self watched my good sir/lady :moustache:
ANd 5/5

I'll give it a read. Begs the question, what's it a crossover with?

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Thanks for giving it a read.
Not so much a particular crossover as it has a few random cameos around the place. Hmmm, maybe the crossover tag isn't the best descriptor for what I meant it to mean?

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Very good!
You earned yourself a favorite my good sir

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Thanks a lot, I think it's finally settling into shape. It was really far too long for one chapter so I split it in two, and since I can't find the heart in me to cut things out, it'd just keep growing.

Great! Continue as you are, I can't wait for the next chapter!

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Thanks! :twilightsmile: I'm already working on the next chapter, but it's only half done. And that's before proof reading and editing. Give it a week or two. :pinkiehappy:

275788 Great! I don't mind how long I read lots of things, so no rush! :pinkiehappy:

I didn't check how long ago you updated this or if its still going on but I want you to know that this is an amazing story... plus, the whole tea-with-a-shadow thing was hilarious! Good job buddy! :pinkiehappy:

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Thanks for reading! As for updates, I wouldn't hold my breath. I found that I require way to much time to stitch together a story from my vague outlines. It might happen one day, maybe. But yeah, consider it on hiatus, while I read other peoples stories instead XD.

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