• Member Since 17th May, 2012
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Chewed Pencil


Such a saucy Pencill....

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Mikey and Adam have been roommates for a few years now. Mikey has been on the wrong side of many experiments/renegade robots/genetically engineered rodents of unusual size every step of the way since Adam first appeared answering his ad. Ever since Adam had found the reboot of My Little Pony, he had been uncharactically silent. Mikey is just about to see why he has been so quiet for so long...

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Comments ( 7 )

Seems interesting, but there are some mistakes here and there.

"Please... You don't think I hadn't already calibrated th portal already? What do you tihnk I am?

Adam wheeled himself as fast as he could towards teh portal witout without a care in th world.

"Oh god! Shall we begin?"

You should fix those :raritywink:

Anyway. CONTINUE ON!

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Yeah, not my best work, but I just had to get it all out of my head before I went full insane. Thanks for spotting the errors.

2699040 I'm really sorry for being biased here :applecry:
BUT YOU OPENED A WORMHOLE TO EQUESTRIA AND THIS ISN'T ON THE FRONT PAGE???? what the hell, this is one of my favorite ideas! :heart::heart::heart::heart:
I really can't wait to see more of this, you introduced it perfectly as well. All motives are there, nothing OOC for normal people (had I been in Adam's shoes, it would have had to be an impossible task to take four years instead of one. And I would do it without question)
You gained a follower.

4858698 One, this is old
Two, this is old
Three, this isn't my best work. I still need to rework all this.

4858711 sorry, I just really like it so far. I know it's old lol but I found it lurking through your stories after the nightmarity one.

The Last Brony Gets His Wish is this the story you were talking about?

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