The weightless cube in the center of the room is the only thing that could help Pinkie escape this nightmare.
She knows it...
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Is this ever going to have a conclusion as to whether the cube was evil or not?
I personally would be fine with it ending as is, but if there is a finish I want to know.
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I leave it to you to decide
Wow.
This is the best fic under 2000 words I've ever read. It was damn well written. Why do I keep thinking of portal and the companion cube?
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I have no idea, that was not the desired affect of the cube
I thought the transition to the ending was accomplished a little too fast - only about three paragraphs. I understand that the story is not long and doesn't really need to be, but a bit of polish might have been nice.
Still, I'm really only arguing the difference between a great story and a perfect one. Either way, it deserves an upvote.
This is why i hate one-shots.
But this is too epic to hate.
This right here is just pure yes.
It's a cubey mark?
Glad at least one of my ideas were used!
Umm...I honestly have no idea what just happened.
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I wanted to write a one shot, you gave me a good idea, I took 2 weeks to write it. Who is pawn?
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Pinkie was dying, to put it short
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I have no idea what your talking about
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I usually hate one shots as well, but I wanted to try one, and see if people like them more then multi chapter stories, since I see a lot of one shots get featured, I wanted to experiment. I got my answer
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having trouble figuring out how to make her sound insane and then totally normal with no idea how other then the description to work with is hard, 2 weeks carefully writing and I got this. Not as bad as I thought it would be honestly...
2697242 Pawndidater. He has wanted to use this idea for a LOOOOONG time.
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well...why dd you give it to me then?
2698058 Because he still won't write it.
Don't feel bad, he'll deal with it.
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took 2 weeks to write this and make it not seem like she was saying the same thing over and over, I think i did the crazy well
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thank ya
Alright, now you have to continue. I wanna see the world Pinkamena wakes up to!
The cube is evil, sick and twisted, but it`s the only thing that can help. It tortures you, hoping that you`ll make the right decision on your own. It makes you sad, but only wants to make you happy. It is an innocent demon. It is an angel from hell. It isn`t evil, nor is it angelic. It is just simply part of the world, watching life go by. Dedicating its life to destroying ponies so that they can finally see the beauty of life. It`s a gift and a curse all wrapped up into one simple cube.
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dear god i feel like i went to a class of phylosphy...thats good
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Looks like this wont be a one shot anymore...I was planning to write another chapter
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It doesnt involve Pinkie
2698480 I`m just a very smart and poetic person. I find the beauty in misery and the deeper meaning in comedy. Nothing in the world has no meaning. Even meaningless things have some truth lying behind them. Knowledge stems from creativity and that is what philosophy is all about. Philosophy is a way of life. It proves that you can never judge a book by its cover, for there`s always something beautiful hidden within.
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words to live by
2698528 That`s very sweet.
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what you said is true
2698516 WHAT?!
...
Oh, I get it. Not Pinkie, Pinkamena. Right?
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not her either
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B-but, the character tag...
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who said it wouldnt be the thing that was with her the entire time?
2698820 ...
I...
But...
Uh...
...
Huh?!
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2698859 Hey, when you gonna write that next chapter!!! Your killing me man!
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I wrote it before...and people said the first chapter was better and I agreed with them. I deleted it because the first chapter leaves you thinking with mystery
2939651 Grrr!
Why????????? 
Please!!!
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I'm sorry, but it is gone now
2939667 Oh well. Very good though. I might have to make a story kinda like this, but longer and involves multiple ponies. If you wouldn't mind.
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don't mind I was actually thinking of doing the same thing. not gunna
2939677 Okay. Do you want to be mention w/ link? If I can figure out the link.
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do you see the thing above with the youtube logo? the thing right next to the right of the color wheel is the add link button
2939692 Okay, thanks.... Hhmmm, what should I call it...
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well this is called No escape...so how about you call it Escape? The point behind this story was that the sonic rainboom had crushed her insides and she was dying in the hospital, I was going to write 5 other stories for all of the other elements because they got hit by it (indirectly) as well. The thing is, they do not remember the time they spent with the cube and don't remember why they are in a hospital room with 5 other ponies. Rainbow had it worse.
Highly intriguing until the end. I always love a good, psychological story, no matter how short. Nice work!
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thank you
2989463 I think I could make that work. I have to put it on my story que, because I only write 2 at a time.
On the to-read list. Please hold.
I don't get the ending?
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She is going back to the land of the living.
Hello, this is HRH Twilight Sparkle, formerly known as superpony55, reviewer and admin for The Gem Hunters. Congratulations! I deem this story a sapphire.
Before I start my review, I want to say wow. Much better than the last story I reviewed. I can see the strand of hope, she is clinging onto, feel her despair. Wow.
Grammar:
The grammar is very good in this piece. It seems a bit off, in a way, but still, nothing too noticeable, or distracting. 8/10
Plot:
The symbolism is amazing. Just... wow. That story makes me think. 9/10
Characters:
Pinkie was a bit off, as I didn't exactly hear her voice, but it was enough. 7/10
Overall, this story was awesome! I would love more, and it just made me feel peaceful, as a well put together story usually does. 8/10
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But it isn't in the sapphire group...