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The Sequel to Number 12.
The Doctor and Twilight leap into the future, though it may be a far darker place than they envision. In the mean time somehow the Doctor keeps crashing around Ponyville, something to do with Fluttershy, but what?

Chapters (9)
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awesome so far, can't wait for the next chapter!

I read the first TR after the Trixie segment as Trixie's Reign. Very good story!

Honestly one of the best Doctor Whoof fics I've read. Keep up the good work! And for all that is good and Pinkie Pie...update quickly!

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Can do! Update tonight.:raritywink:

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Can do! Update tonight.:raritywink:814>>580

Oh! And thanks so much! It's your comments that keep me writing. :heart:

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Thanks! Your wait is over! New chapter time! :pinkiehappy:

Gaaaahhh...:flutterrage:

Curse your ability to make cliffhangers. ;-;

Very Nice...and of course you have to end in a cliff hanger :raritydespair:

All will be forgiven though if you update quickly:raritystarry:

I put off reading this for a long time, since I prefer to read finished stories. But screw it, I can't wait any longer!

Squeak, I honestly think you write Doctor Whoof stories better than anyone else. I am eagerly awaiting the last chapters!

Love the storys best i've seen around my friend actually used travler to get me into ponies your storys have made a brony

I finished the first chapter. It reminds me of everything I loved in 12! The Doctor will not stop making me laugh, and the action is certainly exciting. Allons-y to the next chapter!

:raritydespair: There's no more left for me to read!

I just read two more chapters. Were it a question of possibility, I don't think I'd stop reading ever. Still engaging, exciting, and funny just at all the right moments. I'm reminded on why I love Dr. Who and the characters of FiM

I think complicated is an understatement when it comes to the Doctor...

Just finished Immovable Object. Without giving anything away, I'll just say excitement level at maximum! Very well done!

Alright, so I'm caught up. Add me to the horde with pitch forks or what not pressing you to do the next chapter!

Read first section *Theme Music* Fav'd:pinkiehappy:

Must. Resist. Urge.To Watch Doctor Who!:twilightblush:

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...why? It's a good show, and I am convinced that the moment you figure out what is happening to when for what reason, you are a smarter person for it.

Honestly, this should be a script to an episode of either (probably Dr. Who) :derpytongue2:


Plz update as soon as possible :applecry:

On the topic of theme music, is it the MLP:FIM Theme featuring the Doctor... Or Dr. Whooves Theme featuring Ponies?
These are IMPORTANT DETAILS:derpytongue2:

Also, pony-reapers *SQUEEEEEE*

If you are going to pony-nap anybody, it isn't the Doctor. If there is one thing you never-ever-EVER put into a Trap, it is him.
Queen Twilight seems to have forgotten this simple fact.

What's a Steam Engine? And why wouldn't there be rail ponies? :pinkiecrazy:


Looks like Twi-Two ended up pulling a 'Master' after all. Silly Little Filly, didn't the Doctor's memories show you that going bad and being on the opposite side as The Doctor NEVER works out. Here's hoping The Doctor and Twilight can keep this timeline from ever happening.

Praise-Luna!

One thing I love about it is how you manage to keep the rating and spirit of MLP uncorrupted. Note that the Queen has yet to actually 'Kill' anypony (Whereas Doctor Who constantly kills off minor characters) and yet still keeping things at the edge of the seat. Also, is anypony else seeing a corilation between Rose Taylor/Sarah Jane Smith and the current Twilight/Rarity relationship.

*continues to take notes for what will hopefully be the continuation of the series.*

2334 Now that you mention it, that does describe the Rarity/Twilight relationship pretty well. I had not noticed that.

With the obvious exception that Twilight is much more likable than Rose.

:heart:♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪:heart:

Why haven't you posted any new chapters? Have you stopped for good:pinkiesad2:

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Not at all! I've just been rather busy as of late. With any luck there will be a new chapter next week. :twilightsmile:

*dances on pins and needles in excited expectation* :rainbowkiss:

Another awesome Doctor Who crossover fic. Can't wait for the rest of it!

no updates in months
:raritydespair::raritydespair::raritydespair:

How can you write like that? Seriously, timeslip is bad enough, having to keep track of one timeline, as you skip back and forth along it - but then twisting the timeline around on itself, and throwing in additional timelines, and paradoxes too? It'd be enough to drive me to distraction! And you do it so well! Honestly, I'm surprised the BBC haven't contacted you to write a story arc or two.
... And did he just say it gets a lot more complicated? How can it get more complicated?! I mean, I get temporal theory and dimensional mechanics on a philosophical level (meaning, whilst I get the theory, I won't exactly be doing temporal bloc equations any time soon), but trying to keep track of three... four different times of the Doctor, whilst bearing in mind that at least one of them is likely to be an alternate timeline Doctor, and that there's probably paradox induced insanity ocurring somewhere, all whilst the different Doctor's keep infringing on each others' spatio-temporal domain, is getting to be a bit much. If it get's any more complicated, I'm afraid I'll have to start worrying for your sanity.

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Wow! You read Number 12 all the way up through Traveler in one day? That's a high complement to me I suppose!
In anycase, thanks so much for the complement! Writing this way is something that comes from obsessive whovianism I suppose. It's not that hard once you get the hang of temporal space trigonometry, and have a vague knowledge of Paradox theory.
But yes, things get MUCH more complected in the next chapter, which is part of the reason why it's taken me so long to get it out. But with any luck it will be out this Saturday. And with more luck I won't have gone insane in that time.
Wish me luck! :derpytongue2:

Thanks for reading! I appreciate it.

OMG HE DIDN'T GET TO SAY ALLONS-Y!!! ... Is your first name Alonso?

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ALARM DISABLED. STATE OF ALARM CONFIRMED. INQUIRY: HOW? WHAT? MESSAGE TERMINATES.

So is it Rarity or Twilight that ends up with a TARDIS key?

C'mon, please be Rarity...

21205 So... a week from yesterday? Eh, I can wait. I got candy.

*has no candy, cannot wait* :fluttercry: Pllleeasssseeee wheeerreeeee are you squeaaaakkkk. I can't finish my current project until Traveler is finished. :fluttershbad:

*Tries to steal some of Super Big Mac's Candy*

Why the hell isn't it updated yet!!!! I want chapter 8 dammit!!!!!!!! :raritycry: :twilightangry2:

29766 *shares some of super-big-mac's candy with you* We must unite in the desire for more Doctor.

PLEEEEASE finish the next chapter soon! I'm dieing to see what happens next!:pinkiehappy:

I just re-read all of these, I am soooooo eager to see the ending, I hope you finish soon :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Well I do say, this is the best crossover series I've read.

"From here, things start to get complicated." It wasnt complicated enough as it is? In all seriousness though, I am enjoying this story quite alot.

Wow it just like watching Doctor who.....but with ponys:rainbowkiss:please update soon just read all chapters in one night and need MOAR:flutterrage:...that's if it's ok with you:fluttershysad:

And those of you who followed links from my works here, maybe now you understand why I was so inspired.
Long live The Twelfth Doctor and Twilight Sparkle.

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