Blaze is new in town, and he quickly befriends Rainbow Dash. But is there something more he feels? After a couple of mishaps, something is starting to click between the two new found friends. How long will it be before they finally get down and dirty?
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Im sorry, I would rate this but honestly Everything happened, too quick. There was no emotional connection, she one moment met him and the next she took him to her house instead of a hospital? I just cant see it ever happening like this, I wont rate it since I didn't read it all the way through. Sorry.
I do like the fact that there weren't many grammatical errors, that's nice.
218574 I completely understand where you're coming from on this. I wrote most of this a couple months ago, back when I wasn't so adept at writing. I actually agree where your're coming from with the "moving to fast" issue. Maybe sometime in the future I'll do some MAJOR revision on the story to make it seem more natural. It's not even finished yet though, so I'l have to deal with a that first. And don't be sorry, man, I honestly don't really like this story :/
218603 I'm definitely glad that you understand what I mean, It has some pretty good potential as a romance though, so maybe sometime after the revision, send me a PM, ill check it again! As long as it doesn't degrade into a clop fic... I just cant do clop...
It moved to fast in the beginning, but slowed down near the end. I would like to hear more on this story, since it is finally a romantic that doesn't involve any type of inappropriate shipping.
Really did like it though, hope to see more!
It did move fast in the beginning, but altogether i really enjoyed it, i seriously look forward to the next chapter
i agree that everything went to fast but good none the less
Towards the middle you accidentally switched where rainbow dash and applejack were talking. I saw your earlier comment about how back then you werent good at writting, but when an if you edit it, try to put the names of the characters with the lines they speak. I'm not an expert at writting, and I don't think I should be telling others how to write, so I'm going back to my little hidey-hole and not come out. EVAR!!!!!! Because I'm mentally unstable and I will accidentally(NOT!!!) hurt someone.
This story pleases meh.
You shall be spared.
......................maybe
This was amazing! I really hope you keep working on this. Though I half to say that you came a little bit to fast on the bond between Blaze and Rainbow Dash
i really hope you can continue this story
I had no idea you wrote fictions...
TheRainbowDash AKA SuperSexyRainbowDash AKA The Caped Caper AKA Billy and the Gang AKA I Still love you best Friend in the Whole Wide World no Matter how Many Cheesy Ships you Write.
I'll ready my body to read more in the future. Don't stop writing.
Aww, thanks pikorar. But I give some credit to BlazeAngel too for writing this story for me, I just co-writed and just gave the ideas for this, that is all. Shared credit with friends is of always the best. (This is my other account, I'll publish more fanfics here too in a while)
526084 I am confused here. This who are you talking to?
SuperSexyRainbowDash: pikorar is talking to me, silly filly! TheRainbowDash on bronystate too! That is my username there and here.
Hey, SSRD, ummm I was thinking about making this story for a while now, and I come across to see that you beat me to it ._. So If I make a story with these elements you wont be mad, right?
-Shipfic about Blaze,my OC and Rainbow
-Blaze's ability to make fire by flying fast
-The ability to go mach speeds
-Blaze is new in town
-and to make it funny
I wanted to do a story with all these before I saw this, ask kenne 88 (Jordan E.)
wtf is shipping?
568401 Of course I don't mind! But I really introduced all those ideas into my story on a story you were planning to write? Wow... And you really think it's funny?
Achievement Get! And on the off chance that when we all die and get to choose what heaven we go to ( sorry if you aren't Christian that's just me) looks like we'll be twins! Lol, so yeah I don't mind at all, I look forward to reading it!
583147 Great! thanks, I actually started on the story today, and yeah, I laughed a couple of times when reading your story. And yes everything I listed AND MORE were things I wanted to write, like the name of the story? I wanted it to be "Blazing Rainbow" XD! It took me a while to come up with another name I called it "The Blaze in My Heart" I should be done with the story sometime next week (Thursday-Friday-ish) since I've been planning it for a while now. I'll give you a heads up!
583182 Well got damn. Y EVERYONE USE MY STORY NAMES? Lol, seriously, just about 20 minutes ago, I found out another person has used the same name for their self insert as I have used for mine... little creepy. Well, is it going to be a oneshot or something like that, or is it chapter format? And do you have a guess on how long it will be, cause you said it will probably be done next week. And just so you know, if this made you laugh just a little, I personally think my self insert is a lot funnier. So if you want you can check that out! AND IF YOU DON'T I'LL RAPE YOU WITH MY RUSTIEST OF SHOVELS! I mean what?
583214 Well, me trying to original, unlike that person, changed the title. It's going to be chapter-formatted, with very brief chapters 400-1000 words each. I'm shootin for 8,000 words so far I got 2,554. And I will certainly read your other story as soon as I'm done with my story.
And I try to make the reader laugh at least once per chapter, so, I think you might have fun with it lol
583258 By the way, you got a skype, I think we could talk occasionally and that would make it a lot easier. And not trying to offend when you say that you "stole" my title, you probably thought of it first anyways.
583275 No, sorry. I don't have a skype :( But I DO have a Facebook. Talking there is also very easy. Tell me if you have a facebook. And no, with out any doubt you came up with the story title before I did, I came up with the title 1 day before finding your story. Which was 4 days ago
583307 Well, Facebook it is ma boi! What be it?
583313 My Name is Mikey El-helwi. My Profile picture is of me wearing my U.S. Army uniform.
583321 think I gotcha... I hope.
You know what I don't get SSRD? We have BASICALLY the SAME story, but mine is hated for some reason XD
591720 Yep. lol you should get on fb so we can communicate more easily
568401
Damit i wanted to make it too but well people beat other people to things
But what id do is like the "Nightmare moon incident" only he was defeated by a new element peace
when will there be more?
did you stop working on this one?