While the Crystal Empire works hard to get everything ready for the Equestria Games, Private finds himself in a strangely familiar world. Before he can ponder just how connected to the strange land he volunteers to look after Princess Skyla when her foalsitter contracts the flu. Will Private be able to handle looking after the young alicorn? Just how connected is Private to the empire?
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they are not alone
sweet jesus, the mental image i got reading that!!!!
DDDDD'AAAAAAWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!
*voice goes all gooey and silly*
it's just so ADOWABLE!!!!!!
Now this, this explained even more then i thought was possible. Brilliant side story...Nearly fell over from the feels.
I have read, watched and fav'd nearly everyone one of your stories and have re-read most at least twice. I like how you've integrated parts of the show into your stories and can't wait to read your next one.
Great story can't wait for more.
Why does the Game of Thrones opening fit everything? Also, I'm sort of tempted to print out "The First Crystal Pony" and see if I can get it made into an actual children's book.
2685501That...would be amazing...
2685509 Holy crap that was quick! Have the Game of Thrones opening.
So...That's a neato Sombra origin story! Either that, or it's about Prometheus and I haven't been paying attention to the lore. Good side story!
This was a really nice story and I enjoyed it.
nicely done. though, i kind of wanted to see how you would have made cadence's royal headware/headpiece for this side story. oh well.
just, the feels dude. THE FEELS! i don't think there was a single moment while reading this when i didn't like it. keep up the good work.
That was just beyond adorable and dare I say of weaponized cuteness levels
So we finally find out that Private will be proposing soon cant wait to see if another few stallions will be asking the question *Hint*Hint*
2688152*Whistles Heartaches by the Number Innocently*
if this continues i always think what would private's reaction when twilight became a princess.....it would be epic
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In your profile pic I can't help but notice your cutie mark. A white cross *hint hint*
2694839Not necessarily in a good way...
2718091*Whistles heartaches by the number innocently*
2721167 Just had to look this up. Thank you.
D'aw, ain't that special?
Congrats! You officially gave me Diabetes! How? Sheer Adorableness!
Cause I got heartaches by the number........ (Fallout New Vegas might not seem appropriate, but the song just popped into my head.)
2721167 I got the Fallout New Vegas soundtrack playing in my head because of that. Thank you!
Cool that you combined Japanese and Greek Mythology characters for the stories.