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Shadow_Drake95
I'm 18, single and a big fan of anime. I think Fluttershy is best pony and I like all the pony fan art and music on the internet.
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interesting plot too
This has some potential, Here some writing tips just incase you need it
Indeed this story shows potential. I'll give it a fav to keep track of it and read future chapters ^^
Nice story keep em coming
Reply to the authors note.... dude were not awesome it is purely you keep em coming
the ghost town setting intrigues me. when next chapter?
first
I believed you might have pace this a bit to quick on this chapter. The previous chapters were okay, but this one seem to be pretty rushed, I suggest to rewrite if thats okay. If your having trouble with any of the aspects of writing take a look at this to help with charactization, pacing ect. "Important to all writers!"
Good start, but like GMP stated. It was a bit rushed. Slow down, take your time to have fin and explain the methods of action that are taken. There is much potential in this story. Ever need help, shoot me a PM, but I'm sure you will be fine :)
A good start. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work.
this is quite a good story, you'll see me rading this for a while, ima follow it
It's not bad, though the POV transition seems rather jarring and pointless. Other than that, the idea of them being turned into a changeling and a dragon is interesting and certainly unique. Also, since the monologue is clearly addressing the audience at times, there is no reason for either of their names to go unmentioned.
this is new I like.
Cool story
Okay, what did they turn into? I look forward to the reaction of others meeting them.
4103992 i think a dragon and a changeling