When he was ten years old, Peter Falwell was found by Princess Celestia and her newest student, Twilight Sparkle. Without a home to turn to, Peter was taken in by the princess and looked after him like her child. Over the year that Peter spent in the land of Equestria, he and Twilight became close friends.
Upon returning to his home world, inspired by the culinary experts that prepared the best foods for Celestia and Peter, he sets forth on a dream to become a chef and open his own restaurant.
As a young adult, Peter saves enough for a down payment to develop his own restaurant in New York City. However, as he travels up to the Big Apple, fate pulls its strings and returns Peter back to Equestria. Upon reuniting with him, Twilight and Celestia do all that they can to help Peter continue his dream and open a restaurant in Twilight's hometown of Ponyville.
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My next shot at a slice-of-lifey story. Set in a time where Twilight has not yet (and probably won't) become an alicorn. I'm also writing this when I'm not writing my Attack on Titan crossover, so if updates seem slow, I apologize in advance. Inspired by the song My Dearest by Supercell
What ? No Manticore or Timberwolf ? No super powers ? And the MC want to be a Chef instead of a Heroe ?
Blasphemy !
Hmmmm....Interesting.....
Please. Do carry on!
I swear people have less and less taste here (Pun in tended). you keep going and ignore the dislikes, they cant even say why they don't like. Very fun, feeling hungry now....
2756210 If you look at my multiple reviews under the Craptastic Stories folder on this site, I can offer a good reason why...
2756234 Oh I see....people should take their vendettas elsewhere. it should be about the story right? Oh well, explains it ha ha!
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For some reason whenever I am sad I read your reviews and Thaumtic Slimes to make me laugh.
Also, Me: ooo a story, I will review it and be very honest. See's Movie Master, hey... I will be somewhat nice.
The lack of backstory is bothersome ( How he goes in Equestria the first time, how he leaved, what his dad have done while he was away, etc ... ) but so far we have a decent MC when compared to the usual HiE trash.
He have goals in his life ( to be a chef and have his own restaurant ), no sad past, no superpowers pulled out of his ass, he like his family, he learned something from the ponies and added his own touch to this Learning and the author write and play the talents and goals of the MC quite well.
The OC Crème Fraiche is quite interresting too, she got a nice description, a real talent and personnality and real interractions between her and the MC.
So far this story prove me that you can write an interresting HiE without using the Chosen One Gary Stu superhero Inside.
The MC so far is just a normal guy with real goals in life.
Hope to see some answers about how he came in Equestria the first time ( and how he managed to leave ).
Holy crap, an HiE protagonist who doesn't hate his life?! Impossible!
2756519 Well, I never intended this to be a one-shot, so we do have a lot more story to go.
Time to engage in reading mode.
How I love this part of reading fics.
I think I like this one! To the Read Later list!
Oh man i hope you were just kidding when you mentioned being turned into a pony/pegasus cause if you weren't that'll totally kill it for me. That aside great story so far.
Wrong name or another universe ?
THIS STORY.
I LIKE IT.
I DEMAND MOAR!
Jesus. I can't believe I of all people forgot about Luna's banishment. I'll fix that now.
I can imagine Lyra wanting to work in his restaurant only because she wants to see his hands in action.
2768349 I've got something a little more interesting in mind for Lyra.
2768356 What? Providing music for the patrons?
2768381 You'll just have to keep reading.
2768398 Fair enough, at least have a griffon chef join the staff for those that eat meat.
Finally meeting a lost friend.
>Reboot
Fuck. Yes.
aaawwwww
Aww the feels. Keep it up!
Reading this right before going to work, and shedding manly tears. I'm loving this story so far!
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2770442 your gif of that anime (my sis watched that anime a few days ago but cant for the life of me remember the name (blue haired guy's name) no basket) xD is utterly hilarious and this looks like a really good read! :D
Which season does this take place in? Season 2 or 3?
Love is in bloom for Twilight and Peter... wonder what Shining will say?
Interesting to see someone interested in being a chef instead of the ultimate warrior or something. Very nice.
2774692 Yeah, I got the whole "getting service and internet thing from this.
I understand that the moment in Enchanted was only used for a second as a quickie joke, but I don't see internet and phones being a prominent thing in the story.
As for the heavy descriptions, I was partially trying to just showcase an idle day suddenly turning into an odd one with his transfer to Equestria. Besides, I don't want to turn into this.
He should return home but leave his cell phone with them.
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looking forward to more good sir!
Stay in Ponyville, achieve dream job, fall in love with sister, fuck the universe.
I am really loving this story. And not just because my name is Peter too!
nice. though I don't think anyone can right children speaking while crying without it looking like them laughing.
I LOVE IT.
This story merits a new tag: Food Clop
I'm really enjoying this, especially that it's relatively low key. HiE just living, not saving the world? That makes for a wonderful change of pace.
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Oh, man I can already imagine the flashback to when Armor and Cadence meets Peter.
Careful now Peter you don’t want Lyra to cook and eat your hands.
2789860 Nomnomnom...
Emotional little bugger ain't he?
2811226 That's exactly how I meant to write him.
I wonder how Peter will react to the fact it was actually Rainbow Dash's fault that he was in Equestria. If you think about it, it does make sense since it was her Rainboom that triggered Twilight's overload.
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He has reason to be.
Also: Friendship is a bitch.
Revised solution: Wikipedia how to build a simple generator to keep his electronics powered, if necessary. Remain in contact with father and friends via said electronics. Not ideal, but hey! It's better than nothing.
I noticed since last time I was here that this has had the "Romance" and "sex" tags added to it...
This isn't going to turn into some kind of humanXpony clopfic, is it?
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1. This always had a romance tag on it.
2. Do you see a mature rating on this? Then you have nothing to worry about.
2812793 That's a relief. If there's any types of story on here I try to avoid as if they were the Black Plague itself, they would be OOC stories and kinky sexual ones...!
Edit to add: But how can it have a "sex" tag without earning the Mature rating too?