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After the defeat of Queen Chrysalis, the changelings left behind don't know what to do. They eventually decide to seek the one who defeated their queen and make her theirs. What really goes on in a changeling's head? Can Cadence handle the vile creatures without prejudice? What do the crystal ponies think?

Teen due to cursing, only references to sexual stuff, and cursing

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That's something new i need to say. Lets see how you will roll it out

Well, she is the Princess of Food. Um. Love. :pinkiehappy:

I haven't read it yet, but I definitely will. Changelings are best pony. However, I think a little more spacing between paragraphs might make the text more aesthetically pleasing and easier to read. Not commenting on paragraph breaks yet because, like I said, I haven't read it yet, but will as soon as I finish typing this comment.

Edit: Okay, finished reading, and I like what I've seen so far. This will be interesting ^_^

Well it is different than all the Twilight becomes Queen fics.

Anterla, Cannonda! :rainbowlaugh: Awesome! - says the pegasister from Alberta, Canada.

Down Mane Street was the entire, living force of changelings.

IMPORTANT RULE: Main is actually "Mane"

Always.

Hmm, unique. Will most definitely track. :twilightsmile:

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Aye, the Brony living in Alberta Canada agrees. :raritywink:

I'm guessing Cadence's reaction will be somewhat similar to the Doctor's if he were confronted by a horde of Daleks that had just dropped round to say "Hi."

Methinks I shall follow this, and see what develops.

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Ah, still no puns on Ontario I presume.

let's see where this goes.:trixieshiftright:

Interesting and a nice premise for many outcomes.

Interesting idea, I think making Cadence scared of them will work for this. The only question I have are: exactly how many changelings are left and what the hell happened before the start? Was that from after the Invasion or did something happen?

I can't wait to see what will happen next :derpytongue2: this is a great premise.

I can just see the 1st year anniversary of the land reclamation, with two Caribou with presents of a pack of two-four and hay baconback eh.

Albertan Foo Ta Woo!!!

I suggest you space your paragraphs out a bit (one of the prereaders here caught me with that and I think my stories have looked a LOT better ever since). I was a little shocked by the slightly graphic nature of the changelings' defeat after the wedding, but I suppose it wasn't exactly out of place.

In any case, this is a very interesting first chapter, and I look forward to seeing more. Have a thumb and a star, courtesy of myself. :pinkiehappy:

Interesting idea with some nice funny bits as well. What strikes me odd is that apparently the events of several S3 episodes took place less than a week after the wedding, assuming that it was the Canterlot invasion that left the changelings in the state that they were in at the start. I figured the Empire would have to have been back for a while before it could be considered for the Equestria Games. Not to mention all of the disputes over the land were apparently worked out in this time. And I guess Cadence and Shining had to interrupt their honeymoon to go deal with Sombra.

I'll try not to think too hard about it and just enjoy the story though. I'm interested in seeing where this goes.

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Perhaps the Changelings simply staked out the Empire for awhile before making their move? Or maybe they didn't want to risk a confrontation with Celestia and or Luna before they could reach Cadence, so they simply waited till she and Shining were safely outside the Canterlot city limits before making their move.

Though it would have been odd that Sombra didn't get absolutely buried in a couple hundred angry changelings the moment he began ranting about crystals and slaves, let alone making even a remotely threatening move towards the 'Queen'.

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Thanks! And this is after the invasion. It's been about six days. Bodies arrived at about noon. Bodies stop coming and Chrysalis's is found at 1pm. Five hours later the sun goes down and the royal adviser suggests a burial. Three days later its done and they stare at their ex-home. Three days later, they arrive at the Crystal kingdom. In that time, Cadence asks for their land back and does other princess stuff to get the place organized. I hope this helps a little :twilightsheepish:

So that would mean most of season 3 happened in one week...

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Um....yes. Again, this is only the second story I've ever published here so sorry my logic is off. (making this up) The mane 6 took half a day to get to the empire then the rest to set up the crystal fair. Then Sombra attacked and you know the rest. So Sombra ate up about two days. Then Cadence had to re-organize things which took about three days (her work is no where near finished). A caribou representative of Antlerta came to negotiate land with Cadence which took most of her day.:ajbemused:

dude what you just said sounds like a damn zombie outbreak where they force themselves though things without any care. and i can only picture her face at the bowing changelings.
sad that so many died but still im dieing---eager to see where this leads! :D

I Shall give this one a go.. do not disappoint :)

2685140 Well no one said all the episodes happened in order :twilightsmile:

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*opens mouth to respond*
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Good point :twilightblush:

2687169sorry, I'm tired. I was agreeing that this is gonna be good. Also, hijinks.

A good premise, please continue. As some advice though, try to make it less like a list.
Other than that great start.
Honora Imperator

More. More. More. More. More.

:flutterrage:MOAR!:flutterrage:

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how long till next chapter? :rainbowderp: :3

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The beginning part was supposed to be like a list. It's meant to emphasize how indecisive changelings are and how sheep-like they are

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It's coming, Every time someone watches me, adds a comment, or favorites it makes me nervous my next chapter will not be perfect. But I am determined to get it out soon :pinkiehappy:

I love how the Changelings have been written! It reminds me a little of the Geth from Mass Effect with the way you've represented the 'hive mind' aspect of the Changelings.

Oh, there's no possible way this will end messily. Nope. No way at all.

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Ah right, I get it, no problems then :pinkiehappy: great story all round, can't wait for the next chapter. :eeyup:
Keep it up.
Honora Imperator

I'm visualizing the whole plowing thing right now. It's odd. :rainbowhuh:

>Inb4 Luna and Celestia are distinctly unhelpful

Because thats just how they roll.

This story is AWESOME!!! Keep it up :rainbowkiss:

I have a sudden odd thought about how this continues...
"Dear Cadance,
You say the image of Changelings causes you issues? Ask them to take on the image of ponies while in your presence. They are your devoted followers, they will do whatever you say. Once you are able to deal with them, order them to be productive citizens of the Crystal Empire, and then treat them like any other citizen. That should solve everything.
Your Aunt,
Luna.
P.S. Stop being such a baby."

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celestia yes but I think luna would rather start a feast to congratulate cadance for the conquering of the title queen of the chamgelings^^

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No, Luna would just totally misinterpret the entire situation, and give advice that, while it would be perfectly fine for Cadence if she was living a Millennia ago, is not really applicable in the modern day.

Like "Make them all swear an oath of vassalage to you."

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lets just hope luna doesn´t try to arrange a marriage to ensure the loyalty of the changelings^^

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"That tis a wonderful idea! Quickly, We must arrange for Our niece to be wed with one of the Changling aristocracy to ensure their loyalty via blood ties!"

"But she's already married! To my brother!"

"And?"

For extra fun, imagine everything Shining Armor is saying in the voice of Sterling Archer.

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"Polygamie has been outlawed luna"

"Truly?"

"Yes............why are you looking at me like that?"

wow
that was funny! XD
i cant wait to see what the others will say and more importantly what will be the fate of the changelings! X3

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"Well its a good thing that I only have supreme executive, and for all I know, legislative and judicial power as well, in Equestria. Now fetch my shotgun, its time to hold a wedding."

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"NO, I won´t let you do that to my brother and my sister-in-law"

"Now that you mention it.....your are part of equstrias royalty and currently unwed"

":twilightoops: Here´s your shotgun"

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In all seriousness, I'm pretty sure this takes place way before the s3 finale, so Twilight isn't eligible for shit as far as dynastic marriages go. Then again, her being a princess just because she grew wings..... is not remotely how royalty works. Also: Twilight Sparkle, successfully taking on an Alicorn eons older and thus more powerful then she is. Choose one and only one. Seriously, Luna has probably forgotten more mystical lore about the occult and sorcery and magic and all that jazz then Twilight will learn in the next two thousand years.

"HAVE NO FEAR TWILIGHT SPARKLE, FOR WE HAVE ALREADY PLANNED FOR YOUR WEDDING WITH RAINBOW DASH AND APPLEJACK! YOUR DAYS OF ACCURSED SOLITUDE SHALL SOON COME TO AN END."

>Also geez we need a shouting Luna Emote.

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