• Member Since 29th Nov, 2012
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MechaLump


Just a 'normal' guy

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It's movie night, Vinyl and Lyra's 13th Movie night to be precise and as the two begin to wind down there's only one thing that could possibly set the two off, but what are the chances of that happening?

Submitted for Chaotic Note's Pre-Summer writing Contest

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 4 )

Pretty fun and wild. Awesome.

Da hell did I just read?

Screw it. Nice job, man.

~Skeeter The Lurker

I will be honest, there are two things to consider, use of indentation, and try not to use '()', add it in the details, it makes the story look better. Other then that no complaints from me, good work!

2678688 2678778 2678809 *8 week late thank you message incoming* Thanks for the tips and nice words! :twilightsmile:

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