Pony Verse: A Collaborative Collection of Pony Poetry

by darf

Fuzzy Refractions

Fuzzy Refractions

some days i wake up feeling a little dizzy

like i’m an ocean looking up at the sky

and i can’t tell which is which

‘cause i backwards put my glasses on wrong

and i can’t sea straight

the mountains are a bit wobbly at the edges

when you look at them for a while. i think i

can see all the rocks waving from far away

but i might just be looking too hard

when i fly to work i go really fast

because i’m usually late, and i don’t wanna get in trouble

i do okay, but sometimes the window blows the wrong way

and i have to flap my wings a lot

which makes it hard to breeze

some ponies say i’m simple

which i don’t mind. there’s nothing wrong with being happy

i can’t tell them that they’re wrong

every time they ask me what’s on my mind, i have to tell them

absolutely muffin

Author's Note:

Poem by darf

Comments

[kingtwelvesixteen]

Wait, where did my comment go? I made a comment here earlier.

Oh well, here it is again with the edit I wanted to make already placed inside:

Pfft, absolutely muffin. Puns are an underrated art.

Love how you set it up earlier in the poem with the misspellings and slightly off stuff too.

[Tousle-Headed Poet]

Absolutely delightful! If e.e. cummings was a pony, I'm sure he would be Derpy Hooves.

[Kagitaar]

I really hope Derpy has seen someone about that paraphasia.

[yrfoxtaur]

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What misspellings? All I see is more puns.
(Feel like the ocean cause I can't sea straight)

[hornwire]

ABSOLUTELY MUFFIN!!!

[TheaOchiMati]

Very clever Love it. That last line is great.
I really like what you've been doing with formats and placing lines on the page.

[Bad_Seed_72]

I love this one.