1 and a half years after the Conversion Bureaus first opened, everyone has picked a side. But an attempt is made on Celestia's life, by one of her own subjects. Who is this pony? Why does he think Celestia killed him? And what is his story? T for Mild Violence and Language.
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♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
isnt this over on fanfiction.net?
im sure it is. Y U NO UPDATE?
This is pretty good, has an almost STALKER feel to it in the second chapter which just makes it awesome! Hope to see more.
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Thanks! I personally have never played any of the STALKER games, although I have read 'Roadside Picnic' I doubt my computer would be able to take Stalker
Anywho, I am sorta going for the 'wasteland'-y feel of post-apocalyptic games, without using any of the pre-created worlds. Nice to see someone pick it up.
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Well, I have updated, and the reasons of such massive delay is in the footnotes. Yet again, Sorry 'bout that.
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Thanks! Hope you like the new chapter!
let's see where this goes shell we
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I sea what you did there
Luna was awesome in this. She seems to either go from 'Twilight but more reclusive' or 'Pinkie's big sister with gratuitous amounts of Flirt(tm) thrown in'. I like the latter the best, and your depiction of her reinforces that fact.
Also I must inform you that because of this story I am once again plagued by plot bunnies. 1d4chan.org/images/thumb/d/d1/Angrymarines7.jpg/100px-Angrymarines7.jpg
Not only an update, but an awesome one! Yeah I'm sad its so short, but that cliffhanger was pretty great.
yay gilda! with guns!
Definitely a nice twist, the griffins. I was expecting HLF technicals to be honest.
need... moar
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Yea... I'm not that kind of author. Anyways... I'm gonna go have a chat to my editor, about first drafts and stuff...
that was interesting
I've been waiting for a "conversion to X" where X != pony. I like ring of fire (still waiting for that to finish too!) but I want to hear more about griffons too!
Keep it up!
Why HLF fighting against humans as themselfs??? Or it's just one more way to tell that humanity is ***ing **** and etc. This getting disturbing you know, don't forget what exactly you are IRL.
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Well, the HLF only want to off the griffons and then 'save' the civilians, because they believe that they're being forced into ponification. John wants to find out where that are, then avoid them completely.
interesting
Hope this story is still ongoing, liking it thus far
Finishing things matters. It may have been two years, but the act of finishing what you start is always ennobling.
Good on you.
Thank you for another chapter.
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It's always weird for me to get comments from people that are... known, I suppose, in the fandom. Especially since I've been sticking clear for all the time that I have. Thanks for taking the short time to read through my story, and for commenting.
A comment made 91 weeks before this one and a comment made two days before this one.
That's quite a time gap.
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As for what's written so far, it's... okay. *shrug* It kind of feels like something I've already read before. I wouldn't know where, though.
Interesting