• Member Since 1st Apr, 2013
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Amanda Dianne


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One day Cherilee is struck by a strange illness, but her substitute seems to be really strange! But when the CMC investigate they discover something that they shouldn't of known.

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Interesting idea, but it could use a lot of refining. Right now it all kind of blurs together, and it doesn't flow well. It feels kinda overbearingly campy in the second chapter too.

Keep working at it, kid. :twilightsmile:

keep up the good work.

Snails on the other hand mindlessly looked in front of him like a zombie; now that was weird, but then again, boys are weird. So no surprises there.

I'm offended! :flutterrage: :trixieshiftleft: :pinkiesad2: :moustache:

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Aww...
Maybe Scoot could learn to understand the male sex?

Comment posted by jennythegamer deleted Jan 30th, 2014

"Or how to travel through time!" Now Mr.D went white on that last one,

You should see the look on your face! Priceless!

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