With love, Flutters.

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(Inspired by My little Dashie) When your life is filled with emptiness and hatred, maybe all you need is a little pick me up from a loving little pony to reintroduce what life is actually about. It's not all about you after all.

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moviemaster8510

moviemaster8510 #1 · Jun 29th, 2013 · 1 · 1 ·

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Scanning through this, this looks to be a nearly-complete plagiarism of My Little Dashie.

So, um...

jeremy21

jeremy21 #2 · Jun 29th, 2013 · 1 · ·

Could you please space the paragraphs out a bit? As moviemaster said (through an image macro), it is pretty much a big ol' wall of text which I just can't bring myself to read.

Also, if possible, do you think you could split this story up into multiple chapters? I don't know if I could read an almost-thirteen-thousand-word story in one sitting, or find my place in such a massive clump of text as what you've got here. Convenience, y'know?

LightningChaser9

LightningChaser9 #3 · Jun 29th, 2013 · · ·

If you would've read, the author of My little Dashie gave me full permission to write this. And yes, some ideas are shared. Not everything is the same. 2796782

LightningChaser9

LightningChaser9 #4 · Jun 29th, 2013 · · ·

2796828 Of course. Will re edit when I have the time.

moviemaster8510

moviemaster8510 #5 · Jun 29th, 2013 · 1 · 2 ·

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If you would've read, the author of My little Dashie gave me full permission to write this.

Yeah? So, that doesn't mean that you can practically copy-paste someones story, change the character in question and say that it's "different."

And yes, some ideas are shared.

Including and especially the plot and structure.

Not everything is the same.

Sure. The original had Rainbow Dash, this one has Fluttershy. What a WORLD of difference!

LightningChaser9

LightningChaser9 #6 · Jun 29th, 2013 · · ·

2796971 Why don't you read it. The basic plot is really the only same thing. And no, I did not copy and paste the story and just edit it. I worked hard on this story for a while. I was inspired by the story, and just wrote it in a way I would've liked it to play out.

LightningChaser9

LightningChaser9 #7 · Jun 29th, 2013 · · ·

2796971 And plus, don't you think the author would've told me no if the story was to similar to his?

SporeDragon

SporeDragon #8 · Jun 29th, 2013 · · ·

I skim read it, it's clearly not copy pasted. And I noticed resistance at the end. And if that wasn't a New York accent man then I need to rethink my thought process. It's too closely related to the dashie one though, sorry

LightningChaser9

LightningChaser9 #9 · Jun 29th, 2013 · · ·

2797024 Hey, everyone's entitled to their opinion. Thanks for not stating yours like a jerk. And yes, I was going for a sort if new york styled accent. Gives the characters more distinguished dialogue.

SporeDragon