Rarity is the Element of Generosity for a reason. But when an incident of indiscretion happens on Sweet Apple Acres, even Rarity's vaunted generosity is taxed to the limit.
A/N: Based on a true story. Marked Teen for suggestive content.
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Fixing some spelling errors for you:
The unicorn decided to use a off-white as the dominant color for the cotton and spandex outfit.
Pinkie broke character as the babies' reaction warmed her heart.
Her hooves grazed over the sphere. Pinkie gasped as her hooves paused.
Her smile never abated as she magically shifted the garment over to a wooden equinnequin used for such things.
But for Mac’s sake, she would make do.
A loud thud from the ??? startled the slumbering Rarity from her sleep.
(Don't know where the thud was meant to come from but it was probably the door.)
You're welcome.
I liked this story; your writing is very sophisticated and you used a lot of great words. My upvote is yours.
I like the story, but what does the Pinkie bit have to do with the story? I mean I like Pinkie but I didn't think I would see her in the story. The thing is it seems like an aside story, or maybe something that might be expanded into another piece. Besides distracting Rainbow it has no real purpose, well at least that I can see. I'm just confused about it.
2668960 Bloody hell, I thought I caught everything.
Thanks for pointing those out and the comment. 
2669670 You pretty much nailed it with to "to keep
distracted". Honestly, it was either that or slip her some Valium. I actually thought about using it as a one-shot, but the punchline didn't feel strong enough to stand alone.
*le gasp* Mrs. Cake. You slut.
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I see. Well it was funny, just wondered about that part.
Just a couple of things....
Rarity considered herself complimented.
“Eeyup,” the farmer summed it up.
“All three I would guess,” the unicorn answered.
ambition on his back.
“Shucks, Miss Rarity,” the stallion said. “Ah saw you sleepin’
2675211 Got it. Thanks bro.
2675236
Oh you.
Okay, that's fucking clever. Kudos.