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Twilight is tasked by Private to look after Tailspin. As Private takes Spike to return Peewee to his parents, Twilight tries to prove to herself she can handle Tailspin. Will she be able to handle the responsibility? Will Tailspin learn to bond with his brother's love? Will Twlight be sent back to Magic Kindergaten? Twi! Quit writing these descriptions and quit being paranoid! Anyways, enjoy this small tale in the universe of Equestria Noir.

True family is forged from the bonds we share.

(An extended epilogue of Case 22, enjoy!)

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YES! Side-Story!:pinkiehappy:

Twi! Quit writing these descriptions

oh my god, it's happening in the descriptions now:pinkiegasp:

dis gon b gud:raritystarry:

*post-reading*

excellent:moustache:

Nice to see the what happens while Spike and Private were gone and it is a cute story but I just kept laughing at Twilight's overeactions.

ok, something obviously happened to twi during Magic Kindergarden...something traumatic...

If Twilight never over reacted about something, then there is probably something wrong. Besides, I understand perfectly of why she would over react in this situation and she really didn't want to mess up that chance.

Another great side story! :pinkiehappy: I can't wait for the next case to come out so I can see what I can think of for it!

A most excellent side story and very cute too boot. I love it when Twilight freaks out like that -- though I think Private should inquire just what DID happen in Magic Kindergarten at some point, that'd make a great side story in and of itself. Keep up the great work!

nice side story you got here. excellently done. though, besides the fact that twilight still over-reacts to things sometimes and that tailspin sees her as a mother figure, something really caught my attention.

the very last part of the story. more importantly, the fact that it is in green. taking that fact and the fact that sombra's voice in the past and in current are both green and that private's more "evil" thoughts and when he says them out loud are also green. interesting really. here i thought that that "evil" seed of tenacity was rooted and placed because of sombra, but now it doesn't seem like it. looks like prometheus might have been the pony to have actually have seeded it instead. really curious, really. now i really can't wait to see what might be prometheus's/leonard's master plan.

2668465i'd love to read that myself, but, as a personal preference and opinion, wouldn't what happened to her in magical kindergarten be better with the actual canon version instead of a fanon version? though, i'd still read a side story if jacoboy makes it.

“Darling, before you have a traumatic flashback to magic kindergarten, we’re here.”

Crisis averted.

“….Where do foals come from?”

Ah... good luck with that, Private.

“You mean, I panicked over nothing?!”

It's kinda your thing. :twilightblush:

“Big Bro, Big Sis…forever…”

BBBSF!

Great storie cant wait for the next storie. :eeyup::twilightsmile::yay:

pinkie says:Typical twilight
:pinkiesmile:

hey pretty good I liked it this will be a very good story, I hope you make many more chapters and never give up, also, check out my story "A friend to the end" if you ever get a chance, and if you do please review and let me know how it is, and also please favorite If you liked it tell me what you thought, and again, good story.

Aw, all the feels... :eeyup:

"....Where do Foals come from?" :rainbowderp:
Whelp we're never telling Twilight we had this conversation like EVER!

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