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In an Equestria made perfect by an eternal spell, impurities in ponies are few and far in between. But when one flawed filly is born into a cruel society, and essentially thrown away, she must find the strength within herself to not only defy the laws of society, but become one of the most well-known musicians in the land. And she must do it all while hiding her secret.

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I just want anyone who reads this to know that all future chapters will be much longer than the 910 words that makes this part up. This first "chapter" is to serve merely as an introduction.

Ideally I would have liked to uploaded the actual first chapter as well, but it still need some work.

Thanks guys, I hope you enjoy it.

~LeadWeight

Very good, liking it so far, tracking it

An interesting concept. I am especially curious to see how you have society treat the "imperfects." You seem to be implying that they are ridiculed and reviled. It is very interesting from a sociology point of view to look at how a society that almost reaches perfection treats those who fall short. Personally I would like to see you tackle the stories of many more "imperfect" ponies.

The chapter is short, but as you mentioned it is an introduction. Consider me intrigued.

-Nikola of Tesla
Head of Applied Magic, Canterlot Institute of Technology

Will give this one a try.

Ah, the pretty rare "blind Vinyl Scratch", I see.

And stages of experiencing music apparently are, in order of heightening intensity:

1.Hear it.

2. Feel it.

3. See it.

Nothing wrong here either.

This might be interesting, go aheand and make my day.

Hmmm, epic way to start a story I guess...

Kudos to you for achieving that :rainbowkiss:
I, as well as others i'm sure, are curious to see how this story would develop, but judging by the way you started it, I think it's going to be a memorable one :pinkiehappy:

oly' bacon this is friggin' amazing.

May we please have an update scheduled so we may know when we may have more?

please update soon.

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