• Member Since 24th May, 2013
  • offline last seen Oct 1st, 2013

Alicorn Forever


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Word around town has already spread about Applejack's new stallion, and the Mane Six can't wait to meet him! They plan a party to meet him until Applejack and her Bo are no-shows. When Applejack's friends do find out, will chaos begin?

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 9 )

a bit rushed, characters are a bit off, also from what i remember applejack is one of the more hostile of the mane 6 towards discord during his reformation in season 3.

I know, I just wanted to make thigns interesting.

not to sound negative, but this whole story could have been a single chapter.
That said it's nice short read.

Well, um, this story is nice. I think you threw a lot of ideas into it, and maybe you could polish it a bit. Also the whole meeting her stallion part, kinda seems like an after thought. This is because they just accept him in a couple of minutes, and it takes 3 chapters to get to him. That is a cute pic though.

My reaction
Mane 6's reaction:

Haha Yes! That's what I was imagining
@dragondash

I personally want to beat this writer to a pulp.

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